Time to Sing
Sign of spring comes on wings.3 total reviews
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Oh very nice poem in 1 6 1 . And it's a very good effort at rhyming as well. I do like the picture you used for presentation which has the appearance of a painting. There's something about returning geese I find appealing. Giddy
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Oh very nice poem in 1 6 1 . And it's a very good effort at rhyming as well. I do like the picture you used for presentation which has the appearance of a painting. There's something about returning geese I find appealing. Giddy
Comment Written 10-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review. Appreciated.
Comment from RodG
Your painting/poem combo is marvelous. It is easy to visualize the Speaker "sing[ing]" as the geese return "on wing" in the "spring." I especially feel like singing when I see the first robin in the spring. Rod
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Your painting/poem combo is marvelous. It is easy to visualize the Speaker "sing[ing]" as the geese return "on wing" in the "spring." I especially feel like singing when I see the first robin in the spring. Rod
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Thanks for the read and review. I feel the same about the first robin.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A joyful mood as the
geese return, and thoughts
turn to spring.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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-Very nice artwork
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A joyful mood as the
geese return, and thoughts
turn to spring.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read and evaluate. Much appreciated.
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You are welcome.
