Peacock Rhapsody
A Colorful Performance32 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Proud as a peacock says it all. As they strut around and dazzle us with their beautiful feathers and brilliant colors, we ooh and aah in delight. Yet, it is nothing until they spread their tales into a wide fan and simple knock our socks off with their beauty.
smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Proud as a peacock says it all. As they strut around and dazzle us with their beautiful feathers and brilliant colors, we ooh and aah in delight. Yet, it is nothing until they spread their tales into a wide fan and simple knock our socks off with their beauty.
smiles, Carol
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and personal remarks. The male peacocks are quite stunning. I write about peacocks often. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Hitcher
Well who doesn't like showtime, that time to shine especially when in ones prime... sit back and enjoy ha, ha.
I have read a few of these 5 lined poems lately, yours my friend is definitely one of the better ones, Good luck Sally!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Well who doesn't like showtime, that time to shine especially when in ones prime... sit back and enjoy ha, ha.
I have read a few of these 5 lined poems lately, yours my friend is definitely one of the better ones, Good luck Sally!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Well... Hello there! How nice to see you! I really appreciate the lovely review and well wishes.
Sending you and yours my very best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from robyn corum
Sally,
hahahahahaha! Ain't that the truth! Of course, these creatures are rather amazing when it's not quite 'showtime' anyway. But when the bell rings or the curtain lifts, or whatever internal clock tells them it's time - man, the show begins, and what a show it is. Wow!
This was a fun one. Thanks!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Sally,
hahahahahaha! Ain't that the truth! Of course, these creatures are rather amazing when it's not quite 'showtime' anyway. But when the bell rings or the curtain lifts, or whatever internal clock tells them it's time - man, the show begins, and what a show it is. Wow!
This was a fun one. Thanks!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the excellent review and compliments. Both are greatly appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation, Sal.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery that
describes the peacock.
-He does like to show off so
that makes for a very
good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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-Nice artwork and
presentation, Sal.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery that
describes the peacock.
-He does like to show off so
that makes for a very
good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review of my poem, dear Pam. It is so appreciated. Sending along very best,
Sal XOs...
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You are very welcome, Sal.
Comment from Mary Shifman
I like this poem. I is so catchy and clever and it flows nicely. The picture is lovely too. I think that if any creature has the right to be prideful, the beautiful peacock is the one! Very nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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I like this poem. I is so catchy and clever and it flows nicely. The picture is lovely too. I think that if any creature has the right to be prideful, the beautiful peacock is the one! Very nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and well wishes. Both are so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally XOs...
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You are so welcome.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
I believe your message here, as I listen to the band, is that there is a lot of dazzle in the beginning, but the actual main theme is stunning. When that peacock spreads her feathers, it will be colossal. When we finally hear the real song, hold on to your hat.
Ralf
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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I believe your message here, as I listen to the band, is that there is a lot of dazzle in the beginning, but the actual main theme is stunning. When that peacock spreads her feathers, it will be colossal. When we finally hear the real song, hold on to your hat.
Ralf
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much for the lovely review of my poem, dear Ralf. It is most appreciated. Sending along my very best, Sally XOs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. One day I was driving home from getting my oil changed. Standing alongside the road, here in Texas there are often uninhabited areas, there was a peacock in it's full glory. I was shocked and drove down some and turned around. I wanted to make sure I wasn't seeing things. Yes, it was a peacock. I know they are not native to Texas. I have no clue what it was doing there, but it was beautiful. I enjoyed reading your poem and good luck.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. One day I was driving home from getting my oil changed. Standing alongside the road, here in Texas there are often uninhabited areas, there was a peacock in it's full glory. I was shocked and drove down some and turned around. I wanted to make sure I wasn't seeing things. Yes, it was a peacock. I know they are not native to Texas. I have no clue what it was doing there, but it was beautiful. I enjoyed reading your poem and good luck.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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The peacocks are very stunning and definitely would cause you to pull over. I?m glad you got to see one. I?m surrounded where I am is there used to be a plantation here in the peacocks room freely in my neighborhood. Sending along my very best to you today as always, Sally XOs
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Peacocks are radiant birds of the fowl family known for the bird's sheer beauty. They are best known for being a universal symbol of beauty, romance, and love. Our Hindu deity Lord Krishna always has a peacock feather in his crown! You have captured the Peacock's feature in a short poem along with the wonderful Rapsody in Blue. Much enjoyed!Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Peacocks are radiant birds of the fowl family known for the bird's sheer beauty. They are best known for being a universal symbol of beauty, romance, and love. Our Hindu deity Lord Krishna always has a peacock feather in his crown! You have captured the Peacock's feature in a short poem along with the wonderful Rapsody in Blue. Much enjoyed!Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Aw, thank you so much, my peacock loving friend. I'm delighted you enjoyed this one and the music. It seemed to go well with the theme. Sending you and yours my peacock best,
Sally :))
Comment from Mark D. R.
Sally,
Remember, it is the male peacock who makes the show. LO
In our travels, we saw a flock of peacocks strutting their stuff and displaying their fans/feathers.
Your overall presentation is noteworthy. Terrific combo of words and artwork! Your last line sums it all for all reviewers.
Best wishes in the contest voting.
Mark
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Sally,
Remember, it is the male peacock who makes the show. LO
In our travels, we saw a flock of peacocks strutting their stuff and displaying their fans/feathers.
Your overall presentation is noteworthy. Terrific combo of words and artwork! Your last line sums it all for all reviewers.
Best wishes in the contest voting.
Mark
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much for your kind review of my poem. It is so appreciated. Sending along my very best, Sally xos
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
What a fantastic 5-line poem for the contest. Your last line was so clever; I could hear the voice of confidence, the peacock so pleased with himself. Very nicely illustrated. I love this, Sally.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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What a fantastic 5-line poem for the contest. Your last line was so clever; I could hear the voice of confidence, the peacock so pleased with himself. Very nicely illustrated. I love this, Sally.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind compliments, dear Gale. It is so appreciated. So good to see you, dear. Sending along my very best to you and yours, Sally XOs
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You are welcome, Sally. I pray you and yours have been well.
