Peacock Rhapsody
A Colorful Performance32 total reviews
Comment from pookietoo
A lovely photo to go with your poem. A very nice poem Keep up the great work writing your poems. I enjoyed reading this one. Good luck and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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A lovely photo to go with your poem. A very nice poem Keep up the great work writing your poems. I enjoyed reading this one. Good luck and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review, pookie. It is so very appreciated. All my. Eat to you and yours always,
Sal XOs
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You are welcome. I can't remember if you reviewed my Jessica's Year Of Seeing Nature story.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These peacocks are indeed beautiful birds and their show is worth the wait as they show off their feathers to attract a female, a fine few words here Sally, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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These peacocks are indeed beautiful birds and their show is worth the wait as they show off their feathers to attract a female, a fine few words here Sally, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the kind review and generous stars, Dolly dear. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Gert sherwood
A Colorful Performance
Peacock Rhapsody
Oh yes it will indeed be an extraordinary show when the peacock spreads its colorful display of his amazing tail
Yes, its beautiful when the a proud peacock decides to shows their amazing tail when opened only, when he wants to
Gert
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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A Colorful Performance
Peacock Rhapsody
Oh yes it will indeed be an extraordinary show when the peacock spreads its colorful display of his amazing tail
Yes, its beautiful when the a proud peacock decides to shows their amazing tail when opened only, when he wants to
Gert
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Dear Gert, Thanks so much for the kind review and compliments. Both are so appreciated.
Sending along my very best to you both,
Sal XOs...
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Sally you are most welcome.
Gert
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your five-line poem is very well-written, descriptive, and charming. You have captured the apppearance and "personality" of the lovely, showy, entertaining peacock.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Your five-line poem is very well-written, descriptive, and charming. You have captured the apppearance and "personality" of the lovely, showy, entertaining peacock.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Thank for the super kind review, dear Janice! Blessings always,
Sal XOs
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Well, then all the showy pride will be brilliantly displayed at "showtime." That's cute and they are beautiful birds with a special gift from God to praise Him with their odd calls and bright feathers.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Lol. Well, then all the showy pride will be brilliantly displayed at "showtime." That's cute and they are beautiful birds with a special gift from God to praise Him with their odd calls and bright feathers.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous well wishes. I had forgotten about this until the last hour! Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Wendy G
Hi Sally, sounds just like what a peacock might be thinking or saying! You've captured him perfectly. Next minute he will be strutting around with tail out and all feathers in show. It's a lovely poem! Well done- great entry. Best wishes for your contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Hi Sally, sounds just like what a peacock might be thinking or saying! You've captured him perfectly. Next minute he will be strutting around with tail out and all feathers in show. It's a lovely poem! Well done- great entry. Best wishes for your contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much for the wonderful review and generous stars. Both are greatly appreciated. Blessings abundant,
Sal XOs...
Comment from BethShelby
The peacock are beautiful creature when they spread their tails. Their voices aren't beautiful, but they are certain loud. I like the music you supplied iwth your poem. It seems right for the display the peacock presents.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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The peacock are beautiful creature when they spread their tails. Their voices aren't beautiful, but they are certain loud. I like the music you supplied iwth your poem. It seems right for the display the peacock presents.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Thank e very much for the lovely review of my poem. It is so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs..
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Ah, one of my favorite pieces of music and my favorite bird...my day is complete. You have presented a delightful serenade that I could listen to all day. True beauty from the Lord's own Hand.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Ah, one of my favorite pieces of music and my favorite bird...my day is complete. You have presented a delightful serenade that I could listen to all day. True beauty from the Lord's own Hand.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Aw, thank you, Sherry dear. I'm so very blessed. I'm glad you enjoyed the music and the poem. The concert was long as so good, I just had to share it.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Gloria ....
This is great, Sally. There is nothing conceited about this fellow, the peacock. At least not until showtime.
A fine, and most entertaining 5 liner.
Great luck with the Committee. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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This is great, Sally. There is nothing conceited about this fellow, the peacock. At least not until showtime.
A fine, and most entertaining 5 liner.
Great luck with the Committee. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Good afternoon, dear Gloria. Thank you for the lovely review and added encouragement. It is greatly appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from royowen
A beautifully composed five line poetic entry in this contest Sally, also a marvellous piece of music to go with it. Isn't God marvellous with His magnanimous creation, that blesses all mightily? Beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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A beautifully composed five line poetic entry in this contest Sally, also a marvellous piece of music to go with it. Isn't God marvellous with His magnanimous creation, that blesses all mightily? Beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the super kind review and comments. Both mean so much. Blessings,
Sal XOs...
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Good job
