Peacock Rhapsody
A Colorful Performance32 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This five-line poem, Peacock Rhapsody, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that a showy person, whose style dazzles, does so at all times and at heightening degrees.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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This five-line poem, Peacock Rhapsody, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that a showy person, whose style dazzles, does so at all times and at heightening degrees.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much for the super kind review and stars. Sending along my very best as always, Sally :)) XOs
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Your five line poem gave me a chuckle Sally.
a loud and prideful creature,
wait until showtime - love that colourful finish. They are a gorgeous bird, and I wish you luck in the contest.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Your five line poem gave me a chuckle Sally.
a loud and prideful creature,
wait until showtime - love that colourful finish. They are a gorgeous bird, and I wish you luck in the contest.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 17-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much for the wonderful review and kind compliments. It is so appreciated. Sending along my very best for your day, Sally XOs
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a great metaphor. It is what I would say to describe myself. I am sure there are other readers who would also identify with this description. I looked up Peacock medicine. It says the peacock is a gorgeous messenger of dreaming all that you can be with no limits...embracing infinite possibility. A great topic.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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This is a great metaphor. It is what I would say to describe myself. I am sure there are other readers who would also identify with this description. I looked up Peacock medicine. It says the peacock is a gorgeous messenger of dreaming all that you can be with no limits...embracing infinite possibility. A great topic.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind compliments. Both are so appreciated. Sending along my very best for your day, Sally XOs
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
It's kind of like some people. They seem kind of awkward and out of place until they really come through and show their colors. You did a great job with this beautiful creature.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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It's kind of like some people. They seem kind of awkward and out of place until they really come through and show their colors. You did a great job with this beautiful creature.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much for the wonderful review and personal comments. Both are so appreciated. Sending along my very best, Sally XOs
Comment from Cindy Warren
It seems to me he has something to be proud of. Wait till showtime! I've seen them display their tails, and it's amazing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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It seems to me he has something to be proud of. Wait till showtime! I've seen them display their tails, and it's amazing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much for your kind review and compliments. Both are greatly appreciated. Sending along my very best, Sally XOs
Comment from Paul McFarland
A really good five liner. I can't wait until showtime. Nice picture to go along with your poem. The peacock show is always outstanding. It's been many years since I have seen the show.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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A really good five liner. I can't wait until showtime. Nice picture to go along with your poem. The peacock show is always outstanding. It's been many years since I have seen the show.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much for the lovely review of my post. It is so appreciated. Sending along my very best to you and yours as always, Sally :))
Comment from Irish Rain
I love peacocks. But you're so right...wait until show-time!! Then they are unbelievable! Love your 5-line entry Miss Sally! Blessings...
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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I love peacocks. But you're so right...wait until show-time!! Then they are unbelievable! Love your 5-line entry Miss Sally! Blessings...
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much, my dear poet. I appreciate the wonderful review and generous six star rating. You are so very kind and sweet. Sending along my very best, Sally XOs
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Have a wonderful weekend!!!
Comment from RGstar
Just love it Sal.
''Wait until showtime' ...says it all.
I like things that are kept under wraps, until the right moment, for when that moment is, there is nothing better.
Bravo.
Hope this does well.
My best Sally. Just returning, so I guess missed a few bits.
Have a good week.
RG
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Just love it Sal.
''Wait until showtime' ...says it all.
I like things that are kept under wraps, until the right moment, for when that moment is, there is nothing better.
Bravo.
Hope this does well.
My best Sally. Just returning, so I guess missed a few bits.
Have a good week.
RG
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the splendid review and kind compliments. It is so good to see you. :))
Blessings always, RG,
Sal XOs
Comment from Ben Colder
Your photo caught my eye about peacocks. My daughter raising them. They can really put on a show. Exciting birds and have unusual traits. Good one, Sal.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Your photo caught my eye about peacocks. My daughter raising them. They can really put on a show. Exciting birds and have unusual traits. Good one, Sal.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the kind review and stars! Sal :)) XOs
Comment from Richard Frohm
I found this extremely well written. You seem to have a natural ability when it comes to poetry, especially in this style.
Poetry to me is difficult enough, but some writers such as yourself make it look effortless.
Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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I found this extremely well written. You seem to have a natural ability when it comes to poetry, especially in this style.
Poetry to me is difficult enough, but some writers such as yourself make it look effortless.
Well done.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much for the lovely review of my poem. The compliments and stars means so much.
Sending you and yours my very best today as always,
Sally :))
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You are the best!!
