Follow Mama
Time for tea8 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
What? No crumpets for the little duckies? Whatever and the hell crumpets are, I have no idea. But I'm assuming some kind of biscuits or chips, and I know ducks like bread. LOL. Yes, I'm silly. Thank for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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What? No crumpets for the little duckies? Whatever and the hell crumpets are, I have no idea. But I'm assuming some kind of biscuits or chips, and I know ducks like bread. LOL. Yes, I'm silly. Thank for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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Thanks for the review. Crumpets are round bready things that you toast and put butter on. Quite yummy. Take care. Jen.
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I figured crumpets were something like that. I've heard about them all my life, but the few times I've been in England, I was still trying to sober up at tea time. LOL.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweet write and I see this scene in my park all the time, the mating season is over now as Autumn is on its way and it has been a bumper year as we have so many ducks and they take some feeding. A joyous write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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This is a sweet write and I see this scene in my park all the time, the mating season is over now as Autumn is on its way and it has been a bumper year as we have so many ducks and they take some feeding. A joyous write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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Thanks Dolly
Comment from Bill Schott
This nature 3-5-3, Follow Mama, has the proper formatting and sees the ducks swim along for a break from a day of flying, swimming, floating, and eating.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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This nature 3-5-3, Follow Mama, has the proper formatting and sees the ducks swim along for a break from a day of flying, swimming, floating, and eating.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Thanks Bill
Comment from SHABAMO
Love this! You nailed the syllable count, included an adorable picture, picked great colors, and have a great title and remarks. I wrote in this one and I like yours at least as much as mine :-)
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Love this! You nailed the syllable count, included an adorable picture, picked great colors, and have a great title and remarks. I wrote in this one and I like yours at least as much as mine :-)
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from Zoë Ricard
A very sweet, succinct poem. I love the photo you chose for it!
My only critique is the colour chosen as a background - it's very jarring to my old eyes ... :D
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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A very sweet, succinct poem. I love the photo you chose for it!
My only critique is the colour chosen as a background - it's very jarring to my old eyes ... :D
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from LisaMay
I love watching ducks and their busy little families at our local duckpond in the botanic garden, so your poem resonated with me. I can imagine Mama duck giving instructions to her brood.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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I love watching ducks and their busy little families at our local duckpond in the botanic garden, so your poem resonated with me. I can imagine Mama duck giving instructions to her brood.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from Mary Shifman
This appealing picture and charming poem are an effective combination. We live in Maine near a lake, and we often see sights like this in the spring. It is quite a gift, none-the-less.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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This appealing picture and charming poem are an effective combination. We live in Maine near a lake, and we often see sights like this in the spring. It is quite a gift, none-the-less.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Many thanks
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You are welcome,
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Cute image and
nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Mama does like to keep
her youngsters in step.
-It always cute to see them
follow faithfully.
-A good closing line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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-Cute image and
nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Mama does like to keep
her youngsters in step.
-It always cute to see them
follow faithfully.
-A good closing line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much
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You are welcome.
