Jungle Love
Abecedarian Poem6 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wow this is quite an epic write filled with magical rhyming and the worlds wildlife, you even managed to incorporate a story within too, a fine entry for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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Wow this is quite an epic write filled with magical rhyming and the worlds wildlife, you even managed to incorporate a story within too, a fine entry for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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Thanks for your review. I had fun writing this.
Comment from Lana Marie
How cute was that abecedarian children's Jungle Love story! It was a really fun and smooth read. I just was trying not to picture the giraffe and lions love life.lol good luck in the contest this should do well.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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How cute was that abecedarian children's Jungle Love story! It was a really fun and smooth read. I just was trying not to picture the giraffe and lions love life.lol good luck in the contest this should do well.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Thanks for your review. Their love life would be interesting to say the least!!
Comment from Zoë Ricard
Hoorah!! I loved this and can picture reciting it to my grandkids as part of inclusion education. A very sweet, and timely, poem. Great flow. I really enjoyed it!
Good luck in the contest!!
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Hoorah!! I loved this and can picture reciting it to my grandkids as part of inclusion education. A very sweet, and timely, poem. Great flow. I really enjoyed it!
Good luck in the contest!!
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Thanks for your review. I would like to turn this into a kids book just not sure of the process
Comment from Mary Shifman
Quite an interesting romance! You told a nice story with your alphabet poem. I don't think I've ever written one that I can recall. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Quite an interesting romance! You told a nice story with your alphabet poem. I don't think I've ever written one that I can recall. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Thanks for your review. I enjoyed writing this
Comment from Eunice Amero
You have a great poem. I really like it. It makes me want to do mine over. You did a good job using all the ABCs. Thank you for sharing that good poem and keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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You have a great poem. I really like it. It makes me want to do mine over. You did a good job using all the ABCs. Thank you for sharing that good poem and keep up the good work.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
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you're welcome
Comment from SHABAMO
Masterfully done! Keeping the rhyme scheme and a coherent narrative must have been a challenge for 26 lines but you nailed it! No critiques this is just awesome and should be a short kids book
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Masterfully done! Keeping the rhyme scheme and a coherent narrative must have been a challenge for 26 lines but you nailed it! No critiques this is just awesome and should be a short kids book
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the excellent review and the six stars. I've had a few FS poems that people have said would make good kids books. Not sure how to go about it though.
