Rise from the Fall
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Preparations"From one life to another
5 total reviews
Comment from Earl Corp
Since I haven't read any of the other chapters I can't inelligently say if this is a good chapter. Ican say for sure it doesn't stand o it's own merits. You might consider putting a recap on the story so far and a cast of characters in your author's notes
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Since I haven't read any of the other chapters I can't inelligently say if this is a good chapter. Ican say for sure it doesn't stand o it's own merits. You might consider putting a recap on the story so far and a cast of characters in your author's notes
Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Thank you for your feedback, Earl Corp. It's appreciated.
Comment from Kim Kinakin Tuckey
I liked this chapter very much. It was a story that I would continue to read. I am missing the context of chapter one so it is hard for me to give suggestions on how to improve. The only thing I can think of is adding a few more descriptive words. Eg: fabric colours, hair style etc. Good job!
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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I liked this chapter very much. It was a story that I would continue to read. I am missing the context of chapter one so it is hard for me to give suggestions on how to improve. The only thing I can think of is adding a few more descriptive words. Eg: fabric colours, hair style etc. Good job!
Comment Written 15-May-2022
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read my work, Kim. I'll have to look for ways of describing hair and fabric.
Comment from Brian Watson
Excellent writing I must say! I'm surprised not ranked number 1# on the list after reading what I just read from you're very interesting post. You should be ranked up there with the great novelist's like Stephen king and dean Koontz I Think!
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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Excellent writing I must say! I'm surprised not ranked number 1# on the list after reading what I just read from you're very interesting post. You should be ranked up there with the great novelist's like Stephen king and dean Koontz I Think!
Comment Written 29-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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Thanks for the kind words Brian Watson. Knowing that people like my work encourages me to keep going.
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That's good! You should! Do what you're most passionate about and maybe one of these day's you might be as famous as a novelist as Stephen King!
Comment from Carmen Ducharme
Hi unfortunately I did not read your chapter before but this story the one I just read I absolutely adore ! I believe this is a wonderfully written chapter and I enjoyed reading it very much .I look forward to chapter 4 ! Happy Writing :)
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Hi unfortunately I did not read your chapter before but this story the one I just read I absolutely adore ! I believe this is a wonderfully written chapter and I enjoyed reading it very much .I look forward to chapter 4 ! Happy Writing :)
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Thank you, I'll try and get that posted soon.
Comment from Paul McFarland
Nice flow and the story line is easily followed. There are a few typos that should be addressed. Nice way to end a chapter with a ticklish situation for Colton.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Nice flow and the story line is easily followed. There are a few typos that should be addressed. Nice way to end a chapter with a ticklish situation for Colton.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Thank you. I'll check for those errors ASAP.