Dreams Can Come True
If you work hard16 total reviews
Comment from Mary Shifman
What a great poem! An Avecedarian poem with end rhyme--a lot of effort went into this and I think children would love it as much as I do. I have never been good at this type of poem (ABC poems as the students in my class called them) but they enjoyed them. I'm impressed with yours. Nicely done; Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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What a great poem! An Avecedarian poem with end rhyme--a lot of effort went into this and I think children would love it as much as I do. I have never been good at this type of poem (ABC poems as the students in my class called them) but they enjoyed them. I'm impressed with yours. Nicely done; Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Thank you for nice review, I really appreciate it. :)
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You are so welcome!
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Yes, very good indeed. I like that you have written a children's story
that will capture the young of heart and give them inspiration at the same
time. This is a well thought out Abecedarian poem for the contest.
Great job. A worthy contender. Thank you for sharing and best of luck.
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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Yes, very good indeed. I like that you have written a children's story
that will capture the young of heart and give them inspiration at the same
time. This is a well thought out Abecedarian poem for the contest.
Great job. A worthy contender. Thank you for sharing and best of luck.
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Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Children's Abecedarian Poem contest entry speaks a true moral message, if one tries hard, he can make all dreams true; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this, ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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This Children's Abecedarian Poem contest entry speaks a true moral message, if one tries hard, he can make all dreams true; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this, ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Thank you for this great review, it means a lot coming from a poet that I admire. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
This is such a sweet and clever children's poem using EVERY letter of the alphabet! Wow! Impressed! I won't believe it if this doesn't win!!!!!!!!!!!!!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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This is such a sweet and clever children's poem using EVERY letter of the alphabet! Wow! Impressed! I won't believe it if this doesn't win!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Thank you for this inspiring review and the wonderful six stars. :)
Comment from Lana Marie
OK! I declare you the winner... LOL if I had any say in it! This is so well done, a great story that flows so smoothly from A-to-Z. Now you have to publish it so kids all over the world can enjoy your story!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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OK! I declare you the winner... LOL if I had any say in it! This is so well done, a great story that flows so smoothly from A-to-Z. Now you have to publish it so kids all over the world can enjoy your story!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for this awesome review...it truly means the world to me. :)
Comment from pookietoo
This poem is so wonderful. I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the great work writing your poetry. Keep smiling always and good luck to you always. :)
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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This poem is so wonderful. I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the great work writing your poetry. Keep smiling always and good luck to you always. :)
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful six star review ..I can't tell you how much it means to me. :)
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You are welcome. You have a greatvimagination.
