Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Hi Boogienights congratulations on a great Abecedarianpoem A fun story of your little ballerina who made her dreams come true
Nice advice
Cheers Chris

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021

Thanks so much for this great review...it's very appreciated. :)

Comment from Frances Jean

Excellent

Brilliant! Skillfully written and beautifully written. You have managed to tell a lovely story with great imagery and advice for life, ambition and love. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the competition. Franky

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021

Thank you so much for this wonderful review and for your kind words. :)

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

I admire your smooth poetic form, I read your poem from the bottom up in addition to the top down, it can be read either way. I can also see illustrations with this poem, creating a children's book. You did well with this form even coming up with Xerox for the letter x.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021

Thank you for this great review. Those X words are difficult thats for sure. :) Thanks again.

Comment from SHABAMO

Excellent

Wow, I have always had a knack for rhyming, but I have never tried a abecedarian poem like this and think it would be very challenging. Good you included (that means copy) for some of the younger readers!

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021

Thank you this great review. I've only done one other of these, but they are a lot of fun. Thanks again.:)

Comment from Patty Palmer

Exceptional

I really enjoyed your poem for this contest! It moved fast and the rhythm and rhyme are perfect, The story follows in the correct order. You get my vote!
Patty

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021

Thank you for this fantastic review and for your kind words....and your vote! I appreciate it. :)

Comment from Katie Mae Dead

Excellent

What a great message in your Abecedarian poem.
You tell a wonderful and appropriate story children can relate to.
You have great rhyming couplets and the poem flows smoothly.
Mu favorite is your V line and the use of the word "Vigilance" Best wishes in the contest!
Katiemae Dead

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021

Thank you for this very kind and positive review...I do appreciate it. :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fine ABC poem about this dancing Ballerina here and I enjoyed your clever rhyming and innocent story filled with happiness in this children's write, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021

Thanks for taking the time to read my poem. :)

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

This is a fine abecedarian poem with each letter of alphabet neatly stitched into a ballerina's dream.

I don't know how it works for others, but for me I can't make out the first letters that seem white and a very pale blue.

A superb entry into this contest, and great luck to you with the voters. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021

Thank you so much for this positive review, it made my night. :)

Comment from bob cullen

Exceptional

What a truly delightful poem, and made that much prettier and the tiny dancer. So clever to maintain the alphabetical flow. I had no hesitation in awarding you the sixth star. It's no only delightful, it's also brilliant.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021

Wow! Thank you for this fantastic review and the six stars....it makes my weekend.

Comment from AprilViolet

Exceptional

Seriously you should write children's books. How cute was this and the way you effortlessly incorporated every letter of the alphabet in? Bravo! Six stars for you!

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021

Thank you so much for this star filled review...it means a lot to me. :)