The Sixth Sense of Faith
Trust in the whispers of your faith30 total reviews
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very good entry for the 5-7-5 faith competition. Very well chosen artwork and good clear presentation. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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This is a very good entry for the 5-7-5 faith competition. Very well chosen artwork and good clear presentation. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Hi Jenintorre,
Oh, thank you very much for such a stellar review and encouraging comments on my poem. Your words mean so much.
Have a great week :))
Comment from Hitcher
Faith in that inner voice that alerts us to the possibility of unseen dangers ahead. Yep that is a voice worth listening to and worth taking the relevant precautions for : )) Gook luck in the contest !
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Faith in that inner voice that alerts us to the possibility of unseen dangers ahead. Yep that is a voice worth listening to and worth taking the relevant precautions for : )) Gook luck in the contest !
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Hi Hitcher,
Oh thanks for an amazing review and thoughts on my poem. Yes, listen to that small voice that gives you sight into the unseen? Your thoughts are spot on? much appreciate such a perceptive review. Thanks again:))
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is a sense of uncertainty in these words as we never know what we are facing in life and if we have faith we can cope with whatever comes our way, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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There is a sense of uncertainty in these words as we never know what we are facing in life and if we have faith we can cope with whatever comes our way, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Hi Dolly,
So good to hear from you across the pond? Yes, someone said I may have been confusing intuition with faith? and it is a valid point. But intuition has to come from somewhere deep inside of us and I thought I?d explore faith being the determining factor. Both intuition and faith are aspects that are both ?unseen? and could they come from a place that ?wants us to live.?
Oh well, interesting discussion, Dolly. Thanks for another outstanding review and thoughts.
Have a great week :))
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Apt titles for the theme--powerful, stark verse--graceful alliteration in shine/shimmer and faith/friend/foe. Stunning pic complements the piece. This is a contender!
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Apt titles for the theme--powerful, stark verse--graceful alliteration in shine/shimmer and faith/friend/foe. Stunning pic complements the piece. This is a contender!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Hi Elizabeth,
Oh, thanks for such an outstanding review, my friend! I thought I?d explore this aspect of faith. Your thoughts are much appreciated!
Comment from Paul McFarland
This is a nice topic for a Haiku. I want to change the first line to "A lonely dark road." What do you think? The picture goes very nicely with the poem.
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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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This is a nice topic for a Haiku. I want to change the first line to "A lonely dark road." What do you think? The picture goes very nicely with the poem.
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Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Hi Paul,
Oh maybe you are in to something here?.I will consider an edit if I understand correctly? change
Comment from Carlos' girl
Yes faith requires believing in what you dont see. But is that the same as what you are discussing? Intuition to decipher friend or foe isnt what faith is. Its ...intuition
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Yes faith requires believing in what you dont see. But is that the same as what you are discussing? Intuition to decipher friend or foe isnt what faith is. Its ...intuition
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Carlos? Girl,
Good point you make. But what is intuition? I feel that faith makes one aware of things to come or maybe a sensing of evil in a situation or person.
Maybe just me.
Thanks for an interesting review and thoughts. Always a treat to hear from you :))
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Thanks for not being offended by my question.
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Oh no, it was totally valid and correct as well. Tuition comes from someplace ?
I was just exploring ideas connecting to aspects of faith :)). I love to have discourse on all different ideas ❤️
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Thank you
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Faith is a great topic of discourse, and intuition.
Comment from SHABAMO
I think you do a great job taking a slightly different but still completely valid spin on faith in this. I personally fully believe that our "gut instinct" is really the Holy Spirit. Good job!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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I think you do a great job taking a slightly different but still completely valid spin on faith in this. I personally fully believe that our "gut instinct" is really the Holy Spirit. Good job!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Hello,
I want to thank you for such an outstanding review! Much appreciated :))
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Faith 5-7-5 spiritual poem speaks faith in God helps identifying a friend or foe in living, even when you walk alone in dark ways, faith tells; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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This Faith 5-7-5 spiritual poem speaks faith in God helps identifying a friend or foe in living, even when you walk alone in dark ways, faith tells; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Alcreator,
Thanks for this uplifting review and thoughts on my poem.
Much appreciated :))
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork
and nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery describing
the "dark road" and shining light.
-A very good concluding line
with a good message.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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-Good artwork
and nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery describing
the "dark road" and shining light.
-A very good concluding line
with a good message.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Pam,
Thank you very much for a truly gracious review!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Expertly crafted five seven five poem. You definitely met the syllable count and style requirements for the contest entry. Good luck in the contest. The artwork partners well with your poem. Good job!
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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Expertly crafted five seven five poem. You definitely met the syllable count and style requirements for the contest entry. Good luck in the contest. The artwork partners well with your poem. Good job!
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Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Hi Brenda,
Thank so much for a warm review and kind thoughts!
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You're Welcome!
