Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dear Mystery Writer,

I am sorry. I'm just not too sure about what you're saying here. I don't think having faith gives us any supernatural powers to see around corners or see into anyone's hearts better than before. I'm just not sure I get it. I do think that when we have faith we can handle the consequences of our bad decisions...?

Idk. Good luck! Still worth a five - I wouldn't mark you down just because I don't agree. Thanks!

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021

Hi Robyn,

Thanks for keeping the five stars, but I do believe you are right on this?I didn?t make it clear that it was the Holy Spirit that gives us second sight into the heart of good and evil. I thought it would explore that aspect of faith or belief or whatever one may call it.

Thanks for your kindness and your detailed review.

Comment from Sherry Asbury

Excellent

Very spooky artwork and verse. It will take faith with either choice. Faith to see an enemy if such is there - and faith to trust if is a friend.
Really, faith is the only choice as you never know on your own. Fine work with this.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021

Hi Sherry,

Oh my? you nailed it, Sherry! You put that so well? very astute, my friend.

Thanks for this fine review that warmed my heart!

All the best to you ❤️

reply by Sherry Asbury on 09-Sep-2021

Blessings to you, dear one!Q!

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

This is a beautifully crafted piece of spiritual poetry dear anonymous! I thoroughly enjoyed the poem and think it is very effective and poetic!
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021

Hi Rebekka,

Oh, thank you for the stellar review and warm words on my little poem!

You are the sweetest! :))

reply by rjuselius on 13-Sep-2021

My pleasure entirely dear friend <3

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This spiritual 5-7-5, The Sixth Sense of Faith, has the right set up and suggests that our faith can feel the presence of energies which are with us or against us. Cool.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021

Hi Bill,

You are spot on with what I was trying to say in my little offering here.

I appreciate your perception and encouraging words! Thank you, sir :))

Have a wonderful week?

Comment from Eunice Amero

Excellent

Lovely little poem. Thanks for sharing. Sometimes it's hard to get the syllables right but you did a good job and the picture is so nice. Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021

Hi Eunice,

Oh my? thanks for an encouraging review and interesting thoughts!

Yes, these short 5-7-5 poems have their own prickly edges built right in. I always thought they would be too easy, but I found they aren?t really. Have to pack so much into a few syllables ?

Thanks again for a wonderful take on my poem and for your thoughts. Always so good to hear from you!

Have a great week.

reply by Eunice Amero on 09-Sep-2021

you are more than welcome

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This poem tells us what God gives us, light to show a path out of hard times. The black and white accentuates the light aspect.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Dp

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021

Hi DragonPoet,

Oh, thank you for such a perceptive understanding of my tiny poem! Yes, that?s what I was trying to say? You nailed it!

Your thoughts are much appreciated :))

Have a great week.

reply by dragonpoet on 09-Sep-2021

Don?t mention it
Joan

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

I am giving five stars a bit reluctantly - do you need a dash in the last line? Faith warns - friend or foe? Faith warns about who is approaching, friend or foe. Otherwise it reads as "faith warns friend or foe" as if faith is warning both. Just not quite sure what you meant.
Wendy

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021

Wendy,

Thanks so much, I will put a dash where you suggested. Your review it detail oriented and very helpful!

Thank you!

Comment from karenina

Excellent

Oh! I do love that final line! Get the back Satan, for I have faith in my personal Lord and Savior! My belief is my armor...and the font of my charity!

Nice!

Karenina

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021

Hello,

Thank you for this perfect review and the testament to your faith!

Bless you!

reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021

Hello,

Thank you for this perfect review and the testament to your faith!

Bless you!

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Yes Faith can be like a bulwark against the many perils and difficulties of life in which we may find ourselves embroiled - always there to assist and guide us

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021

Hi Zanya,

Thank you for a warm review and perfect thoughts! Yes, we should rely on our inner voice of Faith to guide us every day?

Appreciate your time to read and assess my work :))

reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021

Hi Zanya,

Thank you for a warm review and perfect thoughts! Yes, we should rely on our inner voice of Faith to guide us every day?

Appreciate your time to read and assess my work :))

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

Intuition can be a great tool in helping us make the right moves. It's that feeling you get, that you can't explain but should listen to. Thank you for sharing. :)

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021

Hi Boogienights,

Thanks for a very perceptive review and thoughts. Yes, we should listen to our inner faith and intuition to guide us in life?s perils.

I appreciate your great comments:))

reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021

Hi Boogienights,

Thanks for a very perceptive review and thoughts. Yes, we should listen to our inner faith and intuition to guide us in life?s perils.

I appreciate your great comments:))