Sam Adams Wakes Up Dead
what happens after drinking too much5 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet!
you have three votes now.
Poor Sam Adams I feel for him .. obviously in life he had already "demons "of his own to deal with and so he drank to escape them ... only to wake up and find himself actually being tortured by other demons those that live in hell.
Cool the detailed setting and the pic!
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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Ciao poet!
you have three votes now.
Poor Sam Adams I feel for him .. obviously in life he had already "demons "of his own to deal with and so he drank to escape them ... only to wake up and find himself actually being tortured by other demons those that live in hell.
Cool the detailed setting and the pic!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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thanks glad you liked it and thanks for the votes.....
Comment from writer723
I really enjoyed your spooky and creepy tale. It fits the Halloween theme perfectly in my opinion. I found myself instantly drawn in and on the edge of my seat. You skillfully wove this tale together with cleverness and perfect pacing. Thank you for providing such an intriguing read.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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I really enjoyed your spooky and creepy tale. It fits the Halloween theme perfectly in my opinion. I found myself instantly drawn in and on the edge of my seat. You skillfully wove this tale together with cleverness and perfect pacing. Thank you for providing such an intriguing read.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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it was fun writing it.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Yes, this would be horrific to wake up to. Sam Adams should have learned by now to stay out of the bars. Love the creativity of 'Cosmos Club' and 'City of lost angels'. The ending indeed was hell.
Great contest entry!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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Yes, this would be horrific to wake up to. Sam Adams should have learned by now to stay out of the bars. Love the creativity of 'Cosmos Club' and 'City of lost angels'. The ending indeed was hell.
Great contest entry!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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people never learn.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This OCT Wk 1 - Horror 50 Words or Less Flash Fiction contest entry speaks simply, confidently and interestingly why Sam Adams wakes up dead in Hell, well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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This OCT Wk 1 - Horror 50 Words or Less Flash Fiction contest entry speaks simply, confidently and interestingly why Sam Adams wakes up dead in Hell, well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 05-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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thanks glad you liked it
Comment from giraffmang
Flash horror is one of the most difficult things to achieve as there is so little wordage to set mood.
as they tortured him, he saw his past life fly by and he knew he was in Hell. - this either needs to be two sentences or capitalise As.
I didn't get the significance of the demons speech
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Flash horror is one of the most difficult things to achieve as there is so little wordage to set mood.
as they tortured him, he saw his past life fly by and he knew he was in Hell. - this either needs to be two sentences or capitalise As.
I didn't get the significance of the demons speech
Comment Written 05-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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thanks for the comments. I will consider revising it.
