Secrets in the Wind
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Secrets in the Wind - Chap 43
Begin Again I found this chapter sad and emontial then ending up when Allie knelt in front of her best friend. She pulled Liz into her arms and hugged her. "Liz, it's not your fault. Jack could have had a heart attack, or something mechanical could have gone wrong. It could be a million reasons,
Gert
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Secrets in the Wind - Chap 43
Begin Again I found this chapter sad and emontial then ending up when Allie knelt in front of her best friend. She pulled Liz into her arms and hugged her. "Liz, it's not your fault. Jack could have had a heart attack, or something mechanical could have gone wrong. It could be a million reasons,
Gert
Comment Written 17-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Thank you for reading, enjoying and for the review. I apologize for the short cut-and-paste response but it's all lI can manage right now. Please know that I care.
Hugs, Carol
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You are most welcome
Begin again.
Gert
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Comment from Leann DS
I am still at the ice cream store, reading between customers! :-) You have done a wonderful job with this book.
I noticed one typo for your review:
"Well, let's get and see. Hank and Garth are in the study. Maybe they can look around for it." Allie stood and moved toward the door.
- let's get it and see.
And I wasn't going to mention this next thing because to be honest, I'm not sure if the other James Patterson reference was in your book or the other thing I'm reading, but in case it's in yours, maybe you should pick a different author for the other book reference. if you do not have two James Patterson references in your book, just ignore me.
Of course, you can ignore me anyway... Just wanted to point it out. Hugs and Rainbow sprinkles!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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I am still at the ice cream store, reading between customers! :-) You have done a wonderful job with this book.
I noticed one typo for your review:
"Well, let's get and see. Hank and Garth are in the study. Maybe they can look around for it." Allie stood and moved toward the door.
- let's get it and see.
And I wasn't going to mention this next thing because to be honest, I'm not sure if the other James Patterson reference was in your book or the other thing I'm reading, but in case it's in yours, maybe you should pick a different author for the other book reference. if you do not have two James Patterson references in your book, just ignore me.
Of course, you can ignore me anyway... Just wanted to point it out. Hugs and Rainbow sprinkles!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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I don't recall for sure but I probably did use him twice because I tend to read a lot of his books or Sandra Brown. I'll try to make a mental note so when I go back I can find it. That will be an easy fix.
so you are reading and serving ice cream...sounds like a fantastic job to me! Especially if I get samples. How's the business going? Hope all is taking off ....
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Allie and Liz are best of friends, but suddenly there is much about Liz that Allie is not aware of. This confession that Liz feels she is to blame for her husband's death is part of it and when she returns from telling Hank and Garth about the Coroner's Report, Allie will hear much more. Liz's harbored guilt weighs heavily on her mood.
Ralf
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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Allie and Liz are best of friends, but suddenly there is much about Liz that Allie is not aware of. This confession that Liz feels she is to blame for her husband's death is part of it and when she returns from telling Hank and Garth about the Coroner's Report, Allie will hear much more. Liz's harbored guilt weighs heavily on her mood.
Ralf
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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I'll just say thank you for catching up with all of them. It takes a lot of time and I truly appreciate it. Hope you enjoy the story.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is an interesting part of the story and the dialogue is very good so that I can understand what's happening, although I didn't get to read the earlier chapters due to family responsibilities. You do get your chapters up a lot more quickly than I can.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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This is an interesting part of the story and the dialogue is very good so that I can understand what's happening, although I didn't get to read the earlier chapters due to family responsibilities. You do get your chapters up a lot more quickly than I can.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Sorry for the cut and paste but I am now currently 158 responses behind. I want to make the changes, thank everyone and start fresh. Wishing you a great day.
Please forgive me for being so far behind on answering reviews, fixing suggestions, and thanking everyone for their kindness. Good thing a birthday only comes once a year. I posted to my family that I was cooking and for the first time in years, my house was over flowing for two days after two days of cooking. Now in three days, Matthew starts filming again and I must cook for them. This woman is tired. Thank you for all your support and kindness.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from ShirleyT1
So many emotions are found in your well-written chapter. Secrets being revealed are added to the built-up that is happening in your interesting story. Great job Carol!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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So many emotions are found in your well-written chapter. Secrets being revealed are added to the built-up that is happening in your interesting story. Great job Carol!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Sorry for the cut and paste but I am now currently 158 responses behind. I want to make the changes, thank everyone and start fresh. Wishing you a great day.
Please forgive me for being so far behind on answering reviews, fixing suggestions, and thanking everyone for their kindness. Good thing a birthday only comes once a year. I posted to my family that I was cooking and for the first time in years, my house was over flowing for two days after two days of cooking. Now in three days, Matthew starts filming again and I must cook for them. This woman is tired. Thank you for all your support and kindness.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
I like the way you've woven some of Liz's feelings and thoughts into this chapter, Carol. Of course at first you hinted that she might really have had something to do with Jack's death. I'm relieved to know it's only her guilt about hurting him. Now we'll find out about Hope. Good writing.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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I like the way you've woven some of Liz's feelings and thoughts into this chapter, Carol. Of course at first you hinted that she might really have had something to do with Jack's death. I'm relieved to know it's only her guilt about hurting him. Now we'll find out about Hope. Good writing.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Sorry for the cut and paste but I am now currently 158 responses behind. I want to make the changes, thank everyone and start fresh. Wishing you a great day.
Please forgive me for being so far behind on answering reviews, fixing suggestions, and thanking everyone for their kindness. Good thing a birthday only comes once a year. I posted to my family that I was cooking and for the first time in years, my house was over flowing for two days after two days of cooking. Now in three days, Matthew starts filming again and I must cook for them. This woman is tired. Thank you for all your support and kindness.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
The plot just gets thicker and thicker. I'm surprised Miguel showed up like that. I believe he encouraged Jack to fly the plane and Jack told him Liz was still there. Jack would't told Darryl to get Liz. Hmm, it is strange. I can't wait to see what she has to say about Mary.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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The plot just gets thicker and thicker. I'm surprised Miguel showed up like that. I believe he encouraged Jack to fly the plane and Jack told him Liz was still there. Jack would't told Darryl to get Liz. Hmm, it is strange. I can't wait to see what she has to say about Mary.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Sorry for the cut and paste but I am now currently 158 responses behind. I want to make the changes, thank everyone and start fresh. Wishing you a great day.
Please forgive me for being so far behind on answering reviews, fixing suggestions, and thanking everyone for their kindness. Good thing a birthday only comes once a year. I posted to my family that I was cooking and for the first time in years, my house was over flowing for two days after two days of cooking. Now in three days, Matthew starts filming again and I must cook for them. This woman is tired. Thank you for all your support and kindness.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Great conversation between Allie and Liz. As they say (or sing), that's what friends are for! Why was Miguel there? And what did he overhear? I see you've posted another chapter, and I'm ready to learn more from Liz. Great job! Blessings & smiles. Carol
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Great conversation between Allie and Liz. As they say (or sing), that's what friends are for! Why was Miguel there? And what did he overhear? I see you've posted another chapter, and I'm ready to learn more from Liz. Great job! Blessings & smiles. Carol
Comment Written 04-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Sorry for the cut and paste but I am now currently 158 responses behind. I want to make the changes, thank everyone and start fresh. Wishing you a great day.
Please forgive me for being so far behind on answering reviews, fixing suggestions, and thanking everyone for their kindness. Good thing a birthday only comes once a year. I posted to my family that I was cooking and for the first time in years, my house was over flowing for two days after two days of cooking. Now in three days, Matthew starts filming again and I must cook for them. This woman is tired. Thank you for all your support and kindness.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Good morning, Carol, my dear, and I hope you've had a good week and the weekend just gets better. The heats subsided a little here, so I'm guess it's cooled down a little for you too. Which helps when we can breath on the deck. Thanks for another fine chapter to start off my Saturday!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Good morning, Carol, my dear, and I hope you've had a good week and the weekend just gets better. The heats subsided a little here, so I'm guess it's cooled down a little for you too. Which helps when we can breath on the deck. Thanks for another fine chapter to start off my Saturday!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Yes, thank heavens some of that humidity went away. It's was a wonderful weekend for my birthday (someone must have special ordered it for me). I am beyond exhausted for all the food I cooked (two days of cooking) and then the cleaning. Today after they were in my house for two days...I can start all over with the cleaning. And Matthew starts filming on Friday. Ugh! Hurrah for my son, but it's wearing me out. Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from robyn corum
Carol,
Yikes! Liz might be right. Allie needs to just hush and listen to her friend!!! Of course, that's me the reader speaking. I'm just so afraid that opportunities will be lost or something bad will happen. Worry, worry, fret, fret. Hurry up!
BTW - I voted for you in BOM!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Carol,
Yikes! Liz might be right. Allie needs to just hush and listen to her friend!!! Of course, that's me the reader speaking. I'm just so afraid that opportunities will be lost or something bad will happen. Worry, worry, fret, fret. Hurry up!
BTW - I voted for you in BOM!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Sorry for the cut and paste but I am now currently 158 responses behind. I want to make the changes, thank everyone and start fresh. Wishing you a great day.
Please forgive me for being so far behind on answering reviews, fixing suggestions, and thanking everyone for their kindness. Good thing a birthday only comes once a year. I posted to my family that I was cooking and for the first time in years, my house was over flowing for two days after two days of cooking. Now in three days, Matthew starts filming again and I must cook for them. This woman is tired. Thank you for all your support and kindness.
Smiles, Carol Thank you for the vote!