Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Sally,

Now that is a pretty intense chapter! (Or portion of one.) Poor girl. We have to assume something tragic has happened to Agent Washburn - but man, I sure hope not. He's one of the really good guys! Maybe we will learn that he's okay?????

A couple of notes, if I may:
1.) A(t) no point did she dare to look back.

2.) Reaching the end of the property, she noticed the (barbed wire) had already been clipped.

Very nicely done and highly intriguing. I enjoyed!

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021

Thank you for the lovely review and helpful critique. That "T" must've slipped away. Thank you for catching that. ;))
Blessings always,
Sal XOs

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Thank goodness, help came in time. Now to find out what happened to Washburn. Doesn't sound good, does it. A very riveting chapter, Sally. Thank you.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021

Thank you for the excellent review and kind compliments. Much appreciated and needed. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

This was a very graphic sceen with all the guns being fired. I'm glad Analiese survived, but I'm wondering about the others after things got so quiet after the gun fire ended. I'm looking to more.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021

Thank you for the lovely review and kind compliments, dear Beth. Blessings always,
Sal XOs

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I've done it again, run out of sixes! This was treble six standard, Sal, I must remember to stack one away for you. This was so exciting, but is our agent dead? Ken did tell her to go if he didn't return, and it does seem that way. I'm so glad that Mike got to Analiese before the killer did, they desperately need her alive. This was a great chapter, my friend, very well done! :)) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021

Thank you for the excellent review and virtual six. I'm blessed just to see you. Sending you my best today as always, dear Sandra,
Sal XOs...

Comment from Judy Lawless

Excellent

At the end of the last chapter I thought this was another case, but now you've tied them together and it's going to be a bit of a long ride perhaps. You imagery is wonderful, your dialogue natural. Well done, Sally.

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 Comment Written 07-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021

Thank you for the super great review and insightful comments, dear Judy! Blessings to you always,
Sal XOs...

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

When you were describing the large bull frogs, I thought, great an alligator will get her. LOL I enjoyed reading I really hope Ken made it, but I fear he did not. Author, can you figure someway for him to survive?????

Federal Agent Ken Washburn was concerned that he hadn't heard from his partner, Fred Samuels. (You can omit 'that')

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 Comment Written 07-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021

Thank you for the lovely review and critique. It is most appreciated. Sending you my very best,
Sal XOs..