Running Blind
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26 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
The touch of normality with the wedding dresses helps us realize how life goes on despite the downers. Nice touch.
The successful escape of Analise brings a sigh of relief to the story as we know that justice will prevail. Your stories are always so interesting, Sally.
Ralf
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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The touch of normality with the wedding dresses helps us realize how life goes on despite the downers. Nice touch.
The successful escape of Analise brings a sigh of relief to the story as we know that justice will prevail. Your stories are always so interesting, Sally.
Ralf
Comment Written 20-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and compliments. It is so appreciated, dear Ralf. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Gloria ....
This chapter moves right along at a fast pace, and I love it. Selecting the wedding gear a delight, as was the fast action afterward.
And lucky thing Analiese survived. A little CCR is always a great ending.
Great writing, Sally, and always a pleasure to read and review. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021
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This chapter moves right along at a fast pace, and I love it. Selecting the wedding gear a delight, as was the fast action afterward.
And lucky thing Analiese survived. A little CCR is always a great ending.
Great writing, Sally, and always a pleasure to read and review. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 11-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the glorious review and generous stars, dear one. I'm always so blown away.
Sending you my very best, and love and blessings always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Bill Schott
Just so exciting as the unknown closeness of the killer brings this scene of moving through the dark tunneling. I can feel the adrenaline and rise as we read through to her apparent rescue. Nice.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021
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Just so exciting as the unknown closeness of the killer brings this scene of moving through the dark tunneling. I can feel the adrenaline and rise as we read through to her apparent rescue. Nice.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the see uper stars was and kind compliments, Bill. It means so much to me. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs..
Comment from Cindy Warren
Oh, things are getting scary! I can't imagine Agent Washburn is still alive. Analiese is lucky to be. But how were they found? Someone must be a rat.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Oh, things are getting scary! I can't imagine Agent Washburn is still alive. Analiese is lucky to be. But how were they found? Someone must be a rat.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and insightful comments, dear Cindy. Both are so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Sally,
What a suspenseful chapter! Analiese Irving is safe for now, but what of the FBI agent, Ken Washburn? We don't know if he's alive or dead.
It was nice to see Ana praying, asking for forgiveness in her dealings with Tony the Tiger. But she will have to pay for her misdeeds. God will forgive her. He is merciful.
I never cared much for CCR, but Green River is definitely one of their better songs. I'm afraid Louisiana and its swamps and gators will never see me. Not my cup of tea. I'd rather go to Alaska for a week, and stay in a log cabin.
Nicely penned! But I hope Sally the sleuth will be safe while her menfolk are chasing Eugene.
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Hi Sally,
What a suspenseful chapter! Analiese Irving is safe for now, but what of the FBI agent, Ken Washburn? We don't know if he's alive or dead.
It was nice to see Ana praying, asking for forgiveness in her dealings with Tony the Tiger. But she will have to pay for her misdeeds. God will forgive her. He is merciful.
I never cared much for CCR, but Green River is definitely one of their better songs. I'm afraid Louisiana and its swamps and gators will never see me. Not my cup of tea. I'd rather go to Alaska for a week, and stay in a log cabin.
Nicely penned! But I hope Sally the sleuth will be safe while her menfolk are chasing Eugene.
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the super review and star blast, dear Kim. I'm always so very honored by this. I think I would love an Alaskan cruise and stopover. It is so beautiful in a different sort of way. I live in Florida on a lake. It's much like Louisiana here. We have a nature preserve near us and all sorts of creatures roaming our property. We also enjoy gator burgers from time to time. Tastes like chicken. ;)
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally XOs
Comment from Sankey
So glad to finally see your new chapter. I was keeping "vigil" hehe waiting for you. This was an exciting read. I can't decide if Analiese had done an about face for justice or what? No spags.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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So glad to finally see your new chapter. I was keeping "vigil" hehe waiting for you. This was an exciting read. I can't decide if Analiese had done an about face for justice or what? No spags.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Thank you for catching me and for the super great review! The stars are a blessing. Sending you my best today as always, dear Geoff,
Sal XOs
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello sweet Sal! I must admit that I have not been reading this story and have no idea of the previous plots and themes. but... after reading this, your writing is well done and your cast of characters is varied and relevant to the plot. Good luck on the future chapters.
Melissa
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Hello sweet Sal! I must admit that I have not been reading this story and have no idea of the previous plots and themes. but... after reading this, your writing is well done and your cast of characters is varied and relevant to the plot. Good luck on the future chapters.
Melissa
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Dear Melissa,
Thank you for the great review and for checking me out. Humongous blessing!!!
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from MAMONIA
How intriguing! You do keep your reader on the edge of their seat. I really enjoyed this suspenseful chapter and hope Ana will be okay. I hope the good guys got there just in time to save her from danger.
I just don't know how you do it, dear girl. You sure amaze me even further with each chapter.
Needless to say, you have a winner here. I would be trekking this off to a publisher for the Pulitzer.
Keep on, keep on. You are unbelievable!
My best always,
Marie
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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How intriguing! You do keep your reader on the edge of their seat. I really enjoyed this suspenseful chapter and hope Ana will be okay. I hope the good guys got there just in time to save her from danger.
I just don't know how you do it, dear girl. You sure amaze me even further with each chapter.
Needless to say, you have a winner here. I would be trekking this off to a publisher for the Pulitzer.
Keep on, keep on. You are unbelievable!
My best always,
Marie
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Aw? thank you so very much for the lovely review and generous stars. You?re such an encouraging force in my world. I?m so glad you enjoyed this chapter and my writing style.
Send me your address by private fan mail and I will send you a signed copy of my first book, What The Blind Girl Saw. The other two books are in edit for the publisher, and Running Blind is my fourth novella in the series.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs..
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How wonderful!
Marie Toole
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Delray Beach, FL 33484
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This line shows the relationship between Sally & her husband. "My detective husband wouldn't leave me until he had tightened the security at River Ridge Hospital. This was understandable, and for once, I didn't argue." It has a bit of humor to it. The reader waits with the Analeise to see when she needs to run. I hope she replaced the hatch. You've done well keeping up the suspense.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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This line shows the relationship between Sally & her husband. "My detective husband wouldn't leave me until he had tightened the security at River Ridge Hospital. This was understandable, and for once, I didn't argue." It has a bit of humor to it. The reader waits with the Analeise to see when she needs to run. I hope she replaced the hatch. You've done well keeping up the suspense.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Dear Liz,
Thank you for the lovely review and insightful comments. Both mean so much. Blessings always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Janetsue
I like that this points out the dedication and loyalty of so many unknown people who put their lives on the line to protect those who are innocent. Another well written and exciting chapter! Smiles and hugs, Janet
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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I like that this points out the dedication and loyalty of so many unknown people who put their lives on the line to protect those who are innocent. Another well written and exciting chapter! Smiles and hugs, Janet
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the glorious review and shiny stars, dear Janet. My fictional police force are like so many real ones, hard working with a strong bond with each other. It is one the hardest, thankless, jobs, and so attacked these days. I have enjoyed writing this and adding the virtues and values I've admired in so many real people.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
