Haiku (Autumn Lights the Way)
a contest entry14 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is very pretty. Between the words that look forward to Autumn and the beautiful picture makes this a great entry for the Haiku contest. The picture has me stoked. I want to walk down that road and see what's on the other end. Good job! Good luck with the contest.
HUGS
Patty
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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This is very pretty. Between the words that look forward to Autumn and the beautiful picture makes this a great entry for the Haiku contest. The picture has me stoked. I want to walk down that road and see what's on the other end. Good job! Good luck with the contest.
HUGS
Patty
Comment Written 21-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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Patty,
Thanks so much for a great review, very kind comments, and best wishes.
Have a wonderful and blessed week.
Hugs...Portia
Comment from Wendy G
Your presentation is very beautiful and supports well the words of your elegant Haiku. It is indeed lighting the way with a feeling of an invitation to follow the path to a fiesta. Good wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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Your presentation is very beautiful and supports well the words of your elegant Haiku. It is indeed lighting the way with a feeling of an invitation to follow the path to a fiesta. Good wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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Wendy,
Thanks so much for a great review, very kind comments, and best wishes; they are greatly appreciated.
Have a wonderful and blessed week.
Hugs...Portia
Comment from LisaMay
That gorgeous photograph is the perfect accompaniment to enhance your words. 'Flaunting' is a good choice of verb, capturing a feeling of showing off as the light falls on the crimson path with the feel of a fiesta.
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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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That gorgeous photograph is the perfect accompaniment to enhance your words. 'Flaunting' is a good choice of verb, capturing a feeling of showing off as the light falls on the crimson path with the feel of a fiesta.
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Comment Written 20-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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LisaMay,
Thanks so much for a great review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.
Have a wonderful and blessed week.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from pookietoo
I love the photo. Very nice 575 entry. I love how you say flaunting crimson's pathway. Keep up the wonderful poetry writing. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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I love the photo. Very nice 575 entry. I love how you say flaunting crimson's pathway. Keep up the wonderful poetry writing. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 20-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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pookietoo,
Thanks so much for a great review and best wishes; they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
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