God i'm asking
A poem for my uncle who has COVID7 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your prayer is straight from your heart. Your lines read smoothly with good rhymes. I enjoyed reading your prayer though it is poignant, but not without help. Blessings to you Uncle.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2021
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Your prayer is straight from your heart. Your lines read smoothly with good rhymes. I enjoyed reading your prayer though it is poignant, but not without help. Blessings to you Uncle.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 01-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2021
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Thank you Jan.
Comment from royowen
Isn't it interesting I don't even know anyone who's contracted Covid, but I can understand why you are praying in written words for God to not only heal your uncle, but make your family aware of the wonders of knowing him. This is beautifully written my friend, well done, blessings my friend, Roy
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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Isn't it interesting I don't even know anyone who's contracted Covid, but I can understand why you are praying in written words for God to not only heal your uncle, but make your family aware of the wonders of knowing him. This is beautifully written my friend, well done, blessings my friend, Roy
Comment Written 01-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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Thanks Roy
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Most welcome
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks an earnest prayer to God to act Lord as Saviour of Salvation to poet's uncle who has COVID to raise him back to health; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALC REATOR
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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This poem speaks an earnest prayer to God to act Lord as Saviour of Salvation to poet's uncle who has COVID to raise him back to health; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALC REATOR
Comment Written 01-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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Thank you
Comment from robyn corum
Justin,
Bless your heart!!! I'm so sorry. This stupid, nasty, horrible virus has affected every family and every home in the country - well, the world, I guess - and doesn't show any signs of letting up, unfortunately. I will say a prayer right now that your uncle and your whole family will find peace and healing. Stay strong, my friend. At least you know where to go to for support and comfort. I can't imagine all the ones who have no hope. Hugs-
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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Justin,
Bless your heart!!! I'm so sorry. This stupid, nasty, horrible virus has affected every family and every home in the country - well, the world, I guess - and doesn't show any signs of letting up, unfortunately. I will say a prayer right now that your uncle and your whole family will find peace and healing. Stay strong, my friend. At least you know where to go to for support and comfort. I can't imagine all the ones who have no hope. Hugs-
Comment Written 01-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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Thank you
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is quite nice and you rhymed very well, the wording seems very natural. I'm no poet, but in some poems I read it is obvious the writer is reaching hard to make a rhyme. I hope your uncle has healed. You might want to put a comma after God each time you call on him.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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This is quite nice and you rhymed very well, the wording seems very natural. I'm no poet, but in some poems I read it is obvious the writer is reaching hard to make a rhyme. I hope your uncle has healed. You might want to put a comma after God each time you call on him.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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Thank you
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a beautiful, expressive, skillfully written, deeply reverent prayer that conveys the pleas of SO many people. My daughter, son-in-law, and grandson are recovering from Covid. Son-in-law had it worst of the
three--plus surgery for a huge kidney stone!
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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This is a beautiful, expressive, skillfully written, deeply reverent prayer that conveys the pleas of SO many people. My daughter, son-in-law, and grandson are recovering from Covid. Son-in-law had it worst of the
three--plus surgery for a huge kidney stone!
Comment Written 01-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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Thank you Janice.
Comment from irishauthorme
A terrible affliction, we got the vaccine and still got the virus, just now coming out of it. Hope and pray your uncle pulls through. Thought as a nation we were coming out of the virus but now see another outbreak, all schools are closed here.
Frustrating that we will never know the answers to what and where.
irish
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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A terrible affliction, we got the vaccine and still got the virus, just now coming out of it. Hope and pray your uncle pulls through. Thought as a nation we were coming out of the virus but now see another outbreak, all schools are closed here.
Frustrating that we will never know the answers to what and where.
irish
Comment Written 01-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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Thank you Irish.