The waterfall
haiku and 5-7-528 total reviews
Comment from Eternal Muse
Excellent imagery and visuals in both of those poems. They really "speak" to you, and a terrific artistic presentation makes the poem a pleasure to read.
Thank you for sharing this with us - I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
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Excellent imagery and visuals in both of those poems. They really "speak" to you, and a terrific artistic presentation makes the poem a pleasure to read.
Thank you for sharing this with us - I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much for taking time to read my little efforts
Comment from June Sargent
Very nice presentation for the club challenge. I enjoy learning the different formats each week. Both pieces here were soothing - like the artwork. I enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
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Very nice presentation for the club challenge. I enjoy learning the different formats each week. Both pieces here were soothing - like the artwork. I enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much for stopping by to review my small efforts
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Ah....white noise. Dont we just love it!
This is really wonderful. You've done an excellent job of getting your 2 poems to relate to each other. I'm having trouble with mine.
I like both but the 5-7-5 is my favorite of the two.
What an enjoyable read!
Take care
Katiemae Dead
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
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Ah....white noise. Dont we just love it!
This is really wonderful. You've done an excellent job of getting your 2 poems to relate to each other. I'm having trouble with mine.
I like both but the 5-7-5 is my favorite of the two.
What an enjoyable read!
Take care
Katiemae Dead
Comment Written 03-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much for taking time to read my poems. ironically the roar of the water soothes you.
Comment from Senyai
Hi Sanku,
This is an interesting Club event... first a haiku and then expanding on the haiku writing a 5-7-5 to complete the thoughtful mood.
Love it! Quite effective form and you have penned a very memorable verse. I love the two different expressed thoughts on this thunderous waterfall and the mood it has created in you.
Bravo!
Senyai
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
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Hi Sanku,
This is an interesting Club event... first a haiku and then expanding on the haiku writing a 5-7-5 to complete the thoughtful mood.
Love it! Quite effective form and you have penned a very memorable verse. I love the two different expressed thoughts on this thunderous waterfall and the mood it has created in you.
Bravo!
Senyai
Comment Written 03-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful review .Thanks for taking time to read my poems.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Watching the magic of nature and hearing the sounds certainly does drown out everything else and clears our mind of all the dross, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
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Watching the magic of nature and hearing the sounds certainly does drown out everything else and clears our mind of all the dross, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
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I am very happy that you have enjoyed my two little efforts .Thank you very much for stopping by.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is very nicely done and is well matched by the amazing art work.
Thank you for sharing this lovely, and interesting, piece with us.
Sharon
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
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I think this is very nicely done and is well matched by the amazing art work.
Thank you for sharing this lovely, and interesting, piece with us.
Sharon
Comment Written 02-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Lovely picture and a great description of the waterfall. There is something relaxing and soothing about a waterfall, one of the great wonders of nature. Your poem is very well done.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
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Lovely picture and a great description of the waterfall. There is something relaxing and soothing about a waterfall, one of the great wonders of nature. Your poem is very well done.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
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yes. in spite of the roaring sound the waterfall actually soothes you.Thanks for the kind words.
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You are welcome
Comment from Frances Jean
Loved the concept of your 5-7-5 poem, the idea of allowing yourself the peace and freedom to just be one with nature and quiet solitude. Lovely and a great waterfall picture too. All the best Franky
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
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Loved the concept of your 5-7-5 poem, the idea of allowing yourself the peace and freedom to just be one with nature and quiet solitude. Lovely and a great waterfall picture too. All the best Franky
Comment Written 02-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
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thank you very much for stopping by and reviewing.
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You're most welcome Franky
Comment from Sherry Asbury
I love the waterfall in that it tumbles and does as you said, drowns the rabble so the heart can dream. Your forms are perfect and I wish you luck in your competition. Beautiful artwork that thunders in my soul.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
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I love the waterfall in that it tumbles and does as you said, drowns the rabble so the heart can dream. Your forms are perfect and I wish you luck in your competition. Beautiful artwork that thunders in my soul.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
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thank you very much .yes it lets the heart dream .
Comment from Wendy G
I like this double format of the same thoughts. Interesting to compare and contrast the two. Both are well written! Interesting and different.
Wendy
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
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I like this double format of the same thoughts. Interesting to compare and contrast the two. Both are well written! Interesting and different.
Wendy
Comment Written 02-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much .
