The Beggar's Bane
A Biblical inspiration story that came from my childhood.4 total reviews
Comment from artisart4u
"Do unto others as you would have them do unto you,"
a bible quote. Sometimes people can't wake up until something happen but you can't let people use you either.
Nice, sad inspirational story, good luck with it.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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"Do unto others as you would have them do unto you,"
a bible quote. Sometimes people can't wake up until something happen but you can't let people use you either.
Nice, sad inspirational story, good luck with it.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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Hi artisart4u!
Thank you so much for the six-star rating! I appreciate that you took the time to read my story and make comments. The above Bible quote can also apply in the story. Also, thank you for the good luck wishes. Have a blessed weekend.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Your story is very well written. I like the scripture you have used for inspiration. It is so important that we show kindness and compassion for everyone we meet. When we bless others, God will bless us.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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Your story is very well written. I like the scripture you have used for inspiration. It is so important that we show kindness and compassion for everyone we meet. When we bless others, God will bless us.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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Hi Anne Johnston!
Thank you for your comments and excellent rating. I appreciate that you took the time to read my story and comment on it. Your absolutely right. When we bless others, God will bless us. Have a blessed Labor Day.
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You are welcome.
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
Your story very neatly describes the situation of selfishness leading to loss and compassion to health, physical and spiritual. It is a clear moral tale.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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Your story very neatly describes the situation of selfishness leading to loss and compassion to health, physical and spiritual. It is a clear moral tale.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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Hi NANCY V. FORREST!
Thank you for your feedback and the excellent rating. I appreciate that you took the time to read my story and provide feedback. I wanted to write a more modern story for the contest.
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Comment from AliMom
A very charming and lovely story. The foundation of your story teaches us how to live with one another, how to love one another. I think Sebastien could use a little more character development but parables only give sketches of the main characters so the focus is on the story and the lesson. Amelia is characterized less which leaves the reader wondering if she is indeed an angel. Good job.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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A very charming and lovely story. The foundation of your story teaches us how to live with one another, how to love one another. I think Sebastien could use a little more character development but parables only give sketches of the main characters so the focus is on the story and the lesson. Amelia is characterized less which leaves the reader wondering if she is indeed an angel. Good job.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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Hi AliMom!
Thank you for your feedback and excellent rating. I appreciate that you took the time to read my story and provide feedback. I wanted to write a more modern story for the contest.
