One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy--powerful and beautiful words send a message of loss and remembrance and something to cling to in a time of unrelenting grief
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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Another fine poem, Gypsy--powerful and beautiful words send a message of loss and remembrance and something to cling to in a time of unrelenting grief
Comment Written 01-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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Mike, thank you very much for the exceptional detailed review, six stars, and kind words!!!
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Comment from Janetsue
This really is a beautiful posting. It speaks of a great love shared through original poetry that is being read over and over again with the passing years.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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This really is a beautiful posting. It speaks of a great love shared through original poetry that is being read over and over again with the passing years.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much, Janet. I really appreciate your exceptional review and six stars!!
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Comment from lyenochka
Lovely! That's a wonderful last couple of lines:
"The petals' scent preserved
amidst the rhythm of his words"
That covers the sense of smell and sound and even if the scent of the rose petals are gone, the scent of his words still are sweet.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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Lovely! That's a wonderful last couple of lines:
"The petals' scent preserved
amidst the rhythm of his words"
That covers the sense of smell and sound and even if the scent of the rose petals are gone, the scent of his words still are sweet.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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Yes, you got it :)
I hope you are having a good time with your parents.
Thank you very much for your review and feedback.
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Comment from Mrs. KT
Absolutely beautiful, Gypsy!
Moving and meaningful, resonating deeply with me...
The SIJO is an interesting form - one that I hope to attempt.
Thank you for sharing. I know your words will resonate with many!
diane
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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Absolutely beautiful, Gypsy!
Moving and meaningful, resonating deeply with me...
The SIJO is an interesting form - one that I hope to attempt.
Thank you for sharing. I know your words will resonate with many!
diane
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much, Diane. Your exceptional review means a lot to me. I appreciate your kind words and six stars!!
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Ps. I hope you try it out.
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My pleasure, Gypsy!
I will... as soon as I recover from my "Golden Shovel" attempt! :) :) :)
diane
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation, Gypsy.
-A good topic and imagery.
-You set the theme up well in line one.
-You show how she honors his
memory with "his last rose."
-Very good concluding lines.
-A very good poem that paints
a vivid picture of this woman
paying tribute to her late husband.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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-Nice image and
presentation, Gypsy.
-A good topic and imagery.
-You set the theme up well in line one.
-You show how she honors his
memory with "his last rose."
-Very good concluding lines.
-A very good poem that paints
a vivid picture of this woman
paying tribute to her late husband.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much, Pam. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. :)
Gypsy hugs
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You are very welcome, Gypsy, it was a very good poem.
Comment from JudyE
This was enjoyable to read and very evocative. I've just finished reading a book about a young couple who were parted for thirty-seven years but eventually found each other again.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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This was enjoyable to read and very evocative. I've just finished reading a book about a young couple who were parted for thirty-seven years but eventually found each other again.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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I like that kind of book with a good ending.
Thank you very much, Judy. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. :)
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Comment from royowen
I guess that's the real reason I write, not only does it get my journaled thoughts on paper, but it reveals God's love and mine for those that proceed me, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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I guess that's the real reason I write, not only does it get my journaled thoughts on paper, but it reveals God's love and mine for those that proceed me, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much, Roy. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. :)
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Most welcome