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Unpleasant Memory

An encounter with nature not to be forgotten.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Good entry for the Haiku contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Lovely imagery and presentation. I love chimes. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 02-Sep-2021
    Thank you for your read, review and comments. Much appreciated.
Comment from dellsworthpoet
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A most unpleasant memory, even the thought hurts.

The haiku juxtaposition of pleasing and unpleasant are certainly here. The syllable count is good. The flow is good. The humor is stinging.

Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2021

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
    To bring the thought back, I got stung on the hand last Saturday. Luckily, I had Benedryll close at hand. Thanks for your read, review and comments.
reply by dellsworthpoet on 31-Aug-2021
    You are very welcome.
Comment from L. Kalere
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I love a sense of humor, mystery writer. This is something that a child would love (as well as myself), especially the last line. The photo is vibrant and suits the poem well. Best of luck in the contest.
Linda

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2021

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
    Thank you for your read and review. Much appreciated.