Blue Velvet Sky
Contemplating the sky49 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
the wide, expansive cloak of darkness.... I love your desccription of draped in blue velvet. It makes me look up and feel lost in plush magic istead of evil gloom. Beautiful and fun to read and dream.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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the wide, expansive cloak of darkness.... I love your desccription of draped in blue velvet. It makes me look up and feel lost in plush magic istead of evil gloom. Beautiful and fun to read and dream.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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thank you Carol, your evaluation to this short poem is grand. Thank you.
Comment from lyenochka
I like the mystery in the tone of this poem. I'm wondering what a night sky that " tingles with unknowns" looks like. It gives multiple feelings as the "velvet' reminds me of textures just like "tingling" is also feeling. You bring to mind so much the sense of touch in understanding what a we can't understand.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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I like the mystery in the tone of this poem. I'm wondering what a night sky that " tingles with unknowns" looks like. It gives multiple feelings as the "velvet' reminds me of textures just like "tingling" is also feeling. You bring to mind so much the sense of touch in understanding what a we can't understand.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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Hi dear Helen, I so like your review. Thanks...
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. It is interesting and unique. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. It is interesting and unique. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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Thabj you, Raul.
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You're welcome!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are exciting, inspiring, clear and creative. I pondered on these words and thought about the feelings I get when I look at the
night sky. I found the last line exactly what I feel. The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork goes well with this poem.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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The author's words are exciting, inspiring, clear and creative. I pondered on these words and thought about the feelings I get when I look at the
night sky. I found the last line exactly what I feel. The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork goes well with this poem.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for reading my work.
Comment from LJbutterfly
What mysteries does the night sky hold. Looking up at a dark sky, your imagination can roam to all sorts of places. There are no questions, and no judgement. For me, this is what your poem so creatively expresses, giving the illusions of peace and silence. Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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What mysteries does the night sky hold. Looking up at a dark sky, your imagination can roam to all sorts of places. There are no questions, and no judgement. For me, this is what your poem so creatively expresses, giving the illusions of peace and silence. Well done.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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Thank you ao muxh doe youe fexioua xommwnra.
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Hahaha! Your left hand went askew, but I'm sure I know what you are saying, except for the word "fexioua."
Comment from SHABAMO
Thank you for writing this Amanda. If definitely speaks to my own childlike fascination with the stars and sky, but just as often I end up walking around at night looking up at an empty sky.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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Thank you for writing this Amanda. If definitely speaks to my own childlike fascination with the stars and sky, but just as often I end up walking around at night looking up at an empty sky.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for your gracious comments.
Comment from robyn corum
A,
Yuummmm.... I like so much of this! I like the descriptions of the sky that you've offered - the big black expanse of dark nothingness that we can just gaze at and be marveled by. Yum!
I also ADORE the phrase 'mantle of mysteries' - and I think I may borrow that to work up my own piece, if I can. (Giving you the credit, of course!) Thank you!
A single note for you:
--> enthralled, I am, by this mantle of mysteries'.....
--> there is no need for the apostrophe
Thanks a bunch! - Deeeelightful!
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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A,
Yuummmm.... I like so much of this! I like the descriptions of the sky that you've offered - the big black expanse of dark nothingness that we can just gaze at and be marveled by. Yum!
I also ADORE the phrase 'mantle of mysteries' - and I think I may borrow that to work up my own piece, if I can. (Giving you the credit, of course!) Thank you!
A single note for you:
--> enthralled, I am, by this mantle of mysteries'.....
--> there is no need for the apostrophe
Thanks a bunch! - Deeeelightful!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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Thank you doe ewsinf my linwa vour my aky, sswe friend Roy.
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say what?
Comment from robyn corum
A,
Yuummmm.... I like so much of this! I like the descriptions of the sky that you've offered - the big black expanse of dark nothingness that we can just gaze at and be marveled by. Yum!
I also ADORE the phrase 'mantle of mysteries' - and I think I may borrow that to work up my own piece, if I can. (Giving you the credit, of course!) Thank you!
A single note for you:
--> enthralled, I am, by this mantle of mysteries'.....
--> there is no need for the apostrophe
Thanks a bunch! - Deeeelightful!
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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A,
Yuummmm.... I like so much of this! I like the descriptions of the sky that you've offered - the big black expanse of dark nothingness that we can just gaze at and be marveled by. Yum!
I also ADORE the phrase 'mantle of mysteries' - and I think I may borrow that to work up my own piece, if I can. (Giving you the credit, of course!) Thank you!
A single note for you:
--> enthralled, I am, by this mantle of mysteries'.....
--> there is no need for the apostrophe
Thanks a bunch! - Deeeelightful!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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Hi Robin, I am up there with your lovely comments. Of course if you use those words...It will be an honor. Let me know when it happens...I sm no on line everyday...
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Sometimes it's like even mother nature has her moments where she can't rain or be sunny. Everything just needs a break and I think we can all relate to that. Great job.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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Sometimes it's like even mother nature has her moments where she can't rain or be sunny. Everything just needs a break and I think we can all relate to that. Great job.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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Oh yes, even mother nature has her moments...Thank you for your great comments.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem. Like a child I just inhale this wondrous sight. I soak in the spell of this mystery tonight. Very nice overall presentation. Beautiful photo choice to compliment your words as well.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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This is a beautifully written poem. Like a child I just inhale this wondrous sight. I soak in the spell of this mystery tonight. Very nice overall presentation. Beautiful photo choice to compliment your words as well.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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Thank you for reading my work, Joanne.
