"The Book of Death"
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Coastal Warning!"Is the living really alive and living?
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Comment from Capt Cook
Thank you Ricky for your tale and poem. We had a tornado hear once. And as legend goes no tornado will ever hit our town where 3 rivers meet. That miss conception was discarded that day. You have a interesting and intriguing way of explaining a storms destruction. Thanks for the quality read.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2021
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Thank you Ricky for your tale and poem. We had a tornado hear once. And as legend goes no tornado will ever hit our town where 3 rivers meet. That miss conception was discarded that day. You have a interesting and intriguing way of explaining a storms destruction. Thanks for the quality read.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2021
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Well thank you Captain Cook for your time.
Yes, and also for your reference.
To your own personal experience.
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Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This is a very lively poem engaging in the many 'twists' and 'turns' of hurricanes, past and present. The author's notes are quite entertaining.
I enjoyed your artful poem.
Ralf
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2021
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This is a very lively poem engaging in the many 'twists' and 'turns' of hurricanes, past and present. The author's notes are quite entertaining.
I enjoyed your artful poem.
Ralf
Comment Written 30-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2021
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I'm really glad that you enjoyed this one Ralf.
And there's much better things blowing your way?
"Standing with Satan!"
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Comment from J.R. Michael
Nicely worded piece. To me it had a very unique tone. There was danger and death about, but it also had comedic and light elements to it. Very much enjoyed it, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2021
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Nicely worded piece. To me it had a very unique tone. There was danger and death about, but it also had comedic and light elements to it. Very much enjoyed it, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2021
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Thanks J.R. Michael.
When I write?
Yes, sometimes I try to think about it as I'm editing.
Editing it and enjoy it the best I can.
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Comment from Jewell McChesney
Extraordinary writing that contains many a familiar phrase we could call cliché but used appropriately in this well written poetry!
With a new hurricane in its throws where I live in Alabama, I can relate to every stanza.
Your author's notes are as interesting as the poetry! I need to follow you!
Cleo's work is also beautiful here! Good. Choice!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Extraordinary writing that contains many a familiar phrase we could call cliché but used appropriately in this well written poetry!
With a new hurricane in its throws where I live in Alabama, I can relate to every stanza.
Your author's notes are as interesting as the poetry! I need to follow you!
Cleo's work is also beautiful here! Good. Choice!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Yes right now at this time.
The hurricane Ida is hitting Louisiana is approaching a level 5 which is crazy.
What's more crazy is it's already had one tornado spin off!!
The last time I checked Gusts to 185 and sustained winds of 159!
Thanks for sharing!
Doctor Ricky
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Yikes
Comment from knowledge
What great symbolic format you have displayed in this prose poem. The use of popular stories and movies we have all seen. I haven't been here for a long time. And just lost a wife to lymphoma this 2/24/21 I'm using this my writing to get away from life.
Only 5 stars because I'm just about out of 6 stars.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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What great symbolic format you have displayed in this prose poem. The use of popular stories and movies we have all seen. I haven't been here for a long time. And just lost a wife to lymphoma this 2/24/21 I'm using this my writing to get away from life.
Only 5 stars because I'm just about out of 6 stars.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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But thanks Dear.
Hurricane Ida is now threatening the state of Louisiana.
Yes, and with sustained winds of 159.
A spin off tornado!
Yes, and gusts of up to 185!!
Yes, Yes, Yes!!!
We're going to see what damage just little girl does?
Doctor Ricky