Comment from knowledge

Exceptional

So very sorry to see this. This poem shows sorrow and remorse from your broken heart and soul. You have expressed your pain vividly in three shout lines of poetry. Only thirteen words.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021

Thank you. I did not know any of the people who died personally. In a different time and place it could easily have been two of my brothers who served there, so I tried to imagine what that would have felt like.

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021

Thank you. I did not know any of the people who died personally. In a different time and place it could easily have been two of my brothers who served there, so I tried to imagine what that would have felt like.

Comment from Dr. Nad

Excellent

"Red Repose" is a nice 3 Line Poetry Contest contest entry. This piece is classified as a War and History Poem. As such, the reader realizes that this is a commemoration of brothers who gave their lives for their country. The loss of a family member in service to one's country is a tremendous price to pay.
One note of consideration, for some of us older FanStorians the color scheme hides the already too small font.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021

Thank you Dr. Nad! I will take care to make the font more legible next time.

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021

Thank you Dr. Nad! I will take care to make the font more legible next time.

reply by Dr. Nad on 01-Sep-2021

You're most welcome. I didn't mean to complain, I probably shouldn't have mentioned the font.