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So Soon?

2-4-6-8 Poem Contest Entry

3 total reviews 
Comment from LisaMay
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The end is night - we're all doomed. I wouldn't hurry if i were you, just get in the queue and wait your turn. I hope you ripped up the letter and got on with living it up.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
    lol, I just thought it was hilarious. Thank you for the great review and stars, Lisa. I'm glad you liked this silly thing.

    =}
    Ron
Comment from Wendy G
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This is quite humorous and fits the appropriate syllable requirements. There is a typo to fix before the voting. "You're" should be "your" (possessive pronoun) "you're" is short for "you are". It's a good amd novel idea do best wishes for the voting.
Wendy

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2021
    Thank you the great review and for catching the goof, Wendy. I can't believe I missed that. I fixed it. I really appreciate the generous stars and the heads up. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
reply by Wendy G on 28-Aug-2021
    It?s clever, I like it and I hope you do well.
    Wendy
Comment from Capt Cook
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I love the poem. As well as the picture. It is classic. I oddly envision this old man running, racing another elderly person to a plot. Definetly a Good One! Thanks for the laugh.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2021
    lol Thank you for the hilarious review, Captain. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
reply by Capt Cook on 28-Aug-2021
    No problem buddy. Thanks again for the gem