Comment from C. Gale Burnett

Excellent

I really love the last two lines and especially the 'seasonal curtain'.
This is an absolutely beautiful contest entry ... poem and presentation.
Very best wishes!

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2021

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Very nice image! I like the idea of a four act play (that would be a great title!) and Autumn just peeking around to see if it is its time to play its role. Very creative. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2021

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent 2-4-6-8 poem to the contest
with very good description of the seasonal changes.
Autumn is my favorite season, but winter is the worse.
Excellent art work and colors.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2021

Comment from RodG

Excellent

Autumn is certainly not in the wings around here. I like your theatrical metaphor in describing Autumn's backstage presence. The artwork chosen is perfect. Rod

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2021

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery describing
summer and fall.
-I like the "seasonal curtain," too.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2021

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

A wonderful offering in a new FanStory form. I've never seen this particular form before. I love it and your beautiful poem. My very best in the upcoming contest, mystery poet,
Sally Law :))

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2021

Comment from Joanne Renzoni (Tomlinson)

Exceptional

I'm amazed that you have created such an expressive poem within the confines of such a strict form. I love the idea of a seasonal curtain.
I hope you have tried your hand at haiku. I think you would be good at it.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2021