Bunny Kiss
Children's Rispetto6 total reviews
Comment from cupa tea
That is an adorable photo you put with your poem. I love the orange background. Your poem flows ever so nicely with the image. Good job matching them up.
Good Luck in the contest
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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That is an adorable photo you put with your poem. I love the orange background. Your poem flows ever so nicely with the image. Good job matching them up.
Good Luck in the contest
Comment Written 28-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thank you for reading!!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This cute little rispetto poem takes me back about sixty years. It is because the style of writing used is extremely classical, but this style fits well with the format.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2021
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This cute little rispetto poem takes me back about sixty years. It is because the style of writing used is extremely classical, but this style fits well with the format.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2021
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Good Morning Katherine! and thank you for stopping by to read and review! I do appreciate it. Yes, I LOVE formatted poetry and rarely write free verse. LOL I'm a lover of the sonnet :-) Thank you again for the sweet review.
Comment from l.raven
as kids we had two white bunnies...
they are so loving...so cuddling...or ours were...
I love your poem...precious...so nicely
written...and I love your picture...and colors...
beautiful...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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as kids we had two white bunnies...
they are so loving...so cuddling...or ours were...
I love your poem...precious...so nicely
written...and I love your picture...and colors...
beautiful...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 27-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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My kids had bunnies... so much fun :-) Thanks for reading and for the sweet review!!
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yes they are...smiling back at you...and your so welcome...love xxoo
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
The rhyme and meter are exellent. The topic of a play with a little bunny is charming and gives the flavor of innocence and gentleness. The illustrtion matches the flavor well.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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The rhyme and meter are exellent. The topic of a play with a little bunny is charming and gives the flavor of innocence and gentleness. The illustrtion matches the flavor well.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Thank you for reading and for this review! Much appreciated :-))
Comment from WalkerMan
What could be cuter than a pretty little girl kissing a bunny for the reason given in the last line of this sweet, flawless, children's rispetto? This is a superb entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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What could be cuter than a pretty little girl kissing a bunny for the reason given in the last line of this sweet, flawless, children's rispetto? This is a superb entry for the contest.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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I agree! Sweet little girl and a bunny :-)Thanks Mike for taking the time to read and review!! As always, much appreciated. 6 stars?? Awww thanks again.
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You are most welcome. Every young girl will love this poem, and so will anyone else fond of children. :)) -- Mike
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Wow poet, you really have done an exceptional job with this.
Besides being cuteness overload, you have followed all rules including having the correct accents on the correct syllables making for a flawless read.
Your first line is my favorite....
"Dear little bunny, softly white" - now that's poetry! You put the adjective after the noun. I like that.
This will do real well in the contest. Best wishes.
Katiemae Dead
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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Wow poet, you really have done an exceptional job with this.
Besides being cuteness overload, you have followed all rules including having the correct accents on the correct syllables making for a flawless read.
Your first line is my favorite....
"Dear little bunny, softly white" - now that's poetry! You put the adjective after the noun. I like that.
This will do real well in the contest. Best wishes.
Katiemae Dead
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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Awww thank you for the smile making review! lol yes, I do tend to "push it" in poetry as long as the form has not been compromised. Thanks for taking the time to read and review!! I do appreciate it! AND 6 shiny stars :)))))))))))))))
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You are most welcome!
