Potlatch 2021
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13 total reviews
Comment from Heather Knight
This is a lot of fun, Debra. And the little guy, even if he denies it, looks really angry.
I had never heard of a mad dog stanza. It's interesting to learn something new.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
This is a lot of fun, Debra. And the little guy, even if he denies it, looks really angry.
I had never heard of a mad dog stanza. It's interesting to learn something new.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Thanks so much for your great feedback, Maria :) xxx
Comment from Lulube
Creative, colorful and cute. What a great close-up photo of this colorful bird. Don't you think that birds have the best brilliant colors in this world? Even if one takes them to be angry, get past that thought and see their beauty. nice penning
lulube
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
Creative, colorful and cute. What a great close-up photo of this colorful bird. Don't you think that birds have the best brilliant colors in this world? Even if one takes them to be angry, get past that thought and see their beauty. nice penning
lulube
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2021
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Hey Lulube :) thanks so much for your lovely review and generous 6 star rating, I appreciate both! Sending my best, Debra x
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welcome and ditto
lulube
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Ingenious conception of angry owl--spot-on per the priceless pic--he indeed looks pissed off. whimsical verse in clever rhyme--thanks for the chuckle!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
Ingenious conception of angry owl--spot-on per the priceless pic--he indeed looks pissed off. whimsical verse in clever rhyme--thanks for the chuckle!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Thanks, Liz :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great image and
nice presentation, Debra.
-A well written poem with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like how you take on
the persona of the bird
so it can plead its case.
-I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
-Great image and
nice presentation, Debra.
-A well written poem with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like how you take on
the persona of the bird
so it can plead its case.
-I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much, Pam :)
Best wishes, Debra
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You are very welcome, Debra.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Honestly
by Debra White
I never heard of The Mad Dog Stanza...I like it. I love picture :) he looks so angry LoL
It's good to hear from you
Gypsy hugs
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
Honestly
by Debra White
I never heard of The Mad Dog Stanza...I like it. I love picture :) he looks so angry LoL
It's good to hear from you
Gypsy hugs
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Thanks so much, Gypsy :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Mary Shifman
I really enjoyed this poem and that little guy does look angry! I'm not familiar with the Mad Dog style so I'll have to play around with it. You make it look so effortless but I'm sure I'll have to work at it. You gave me the smile I needed today. Thank you!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
I really enjoyed this poem and that little guy does look angry! I'm not familiar with the Mad Dog style so I'll have to play around with it. You make it look so effortless but I'm sure I'll have to work at it. You gave me the smile I needed today. Thank you!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much, Mary :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the sentiment here Debra, you made me smile and never judge a book by its cover! This is a clever mad dog poem and I loved the picture too, much fun, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
I enjoyed the sentiment here Debra, you made me smile and never judge a book by its cover! This is a clever mad dog poem and I loved the picture too, much fun, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much, Dolly :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Gloria ....
You'd be angry too, if you were saving your eggs from green-coloured pigs. I love that game, and this is just the most fun, and unique Mad Dog Stanza ever.
Super job, Debra and great to see as always. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
You'd be angry too, if you were saving your eggs from green-coloured pigs. I love that game, and this is just the most fun, and unique Mad Dog Stanza ever.
Super job, Debra and great to see as always. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 25-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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Hi Gloria,
Thank you so much for your feedback :)
Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! That's so cute. From that angle I think it makes all the birds look angry. Great use of every syllable in your Mad Dog stanza poem and a good theme for it!
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
Lol! That's so cute. From that angle I think it makes all the birds look angry. Great use of every syllable in your Mad Dog stanza poem and a good theme for it!
Comment Written 25-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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Thanks so much, Helen :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Sally Law
I've never heard of this form apart from you just now. Fun and sassy and has an attitude. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the challenge,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
I've never heard of this form apart from you just now. Fun and sassy and has an attitude. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the challenge,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 25-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2021
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Thanks so much, Sal :) I enjoyed using this form!
Best wishes as always, Debra x