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"The Gift of Life."

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True storiesof life loss and tragedy in this world

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Comment from Aiona
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I had no idea this poem was about continuing the dance with organ donation until the author's notes. That really makes the poem so much deeper. I wish there were more allusions to it within the poem itself though, so that one doesn't need the Author's Notes to tell there's another meaning. Otherwise..... to be honest, I thought it was about serial killer meeting his victims at a dance...... LOL! Otherwise, what a joyous poem!

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
    I thank you for the idea of a future horror Story!
    Serial killers meeting organ tissue donor victims?
    Makes for a little bit of a twist doesn't it death gets life and life loses and death wins?
    But anyway thanks for reading and that's why I usually put extensive editors notes because my writing is so deep.
    I'll check into this maybe I'll allow a couple more little hints about the actual reason for the writing!
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from R56Ma3
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Quite sad indeed and yet receiving a gift of an organ is truly a gift of life. This is indeed a very well written presentation and I thank you so much for sharing. R56ma3 Susan C.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
    When I get into this dark and deep mode.
    And, it's normally when I'm going through the loss of my son Jason.
    I will immediately turn it around utilizing the thought of the Gift of Life donations.
    (of course)
    Thanks again Susan.
    Doctor Ricky
reply by R56Ma3 on 25-Aug-2021
    You're welcome. So sorry for your loss. Prayers and God Bless
Comment from Carmen Ducharme
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To loose a child is the utmost torture any parent could endure .To give his organs to give life to those suffering from the same fate is a miracle and blessing your most incredible gift to give life to those who would die is such an admiral thing ! God Bless you and your loved ones who gave so much in such a sad time ! Your sin will be sitting by God and waiting in your arrival to hug you and love you the way a child loves his parents .Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 24-Aug-2021
    I thank you again Carmen for coming on to my profile site reading my word.
    Well, I don't really get a lot of attention cuz I don't promote my work with a credit card. And, I don't have time for a lot of reviewing.
    I do notice an awful lot of people with all time best in blue ribbon.
    These people also mean an awful lot of follow-up reviews to get to that point.
    Thanks Again,
    Doctor Ricky 1025
    "Still Preaching the Choir Here at Fanstory"