Comment from damommy

Excellent

Eeeek! All I can picture is that poor man eaten by alligators. I first thought he should have sat where he was, but since this was done to him execution style, it wouldn't have made any difference.

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021

Thank you for the super review and support. Both are do appreciated.
Sal XOs..

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

I'm guessing with the weather in New Orleans this morning the gators are swimming for their lives, and hopefully all the displaced people are safely sheltered or have found live boats. Thanks for sharing.

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021

Thank you for the excellent review and stars. Both are so appreciated. Sending you and Yu kids my very best,
Sally :))

Comment from Ulla

Exceptional

Hi Sally, this is a great continuation to the story and the plot thickens.
I just wonder what will happen next. If Fred is dead, then what about Annaliese Irving and Ken Washburn?
It's great writing, and I'm waiting to see what's next. Ulla xxx

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021

Thank you for the super review and generous stars, dear Ulla. Chapter Sixteen is enlightening and answers your questions.

Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

And the plot continues to get thicker. I am wanting about Analiese Irving and Agent Ken Washburn. If Fred is dead are they next? This is a very good write.

The first cold snap of the year rolled into the deep south, turning the maple trees a brilliant red. (We've tried to grow maple trees in Texas. We planted two, one died, the other one is doing okay, but not great. Unfortunately, it never turns red in the autumn, only orange, and then just a few leaves. My husband and I both grew up in Illinois and truly miss the red maple trees in the fall. I'm surprised in Louisiana they would.)

I had a lot coming my way in the days ahead, including the wedding of Lieutenant Miles-Jean Baptiste and Suzy Fleming. In the meantime, I had to get my strength back. Today, I hit the treadmill with oldies playing on my headset. Jackson returned with a Green Thingy, as he calls it, to reward my efforts. The refreshing concoction of spirulina, kale, protein powder, unfiltered apple juice, and banana tidbits--always makes me feel better. We sat together for a while and took in the delicious fall day. (In this paragraph you switch from past tense to present tense and back to past tense. You might want to check it.)


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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021

Thanks so much for the excellent review and kind help. Both are greatly appreciated. Sorry to be so late....
All my best,
Sal XOs..