Running Blind
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Running Blind ~ Chapter Fifteen "The Blind Girl's toughest cold case.
24 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
So that's where agent Fred is. It looks like someone has planned and followed through. The deed is done but to what end. Could this have been Eugene's work?
Ralf
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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So that's where agent Fred is. It looks like someone has planned and followed through. The deed is done but to what end. Could this have been Eugene's work?
Ralf
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and for catching up. Both mean so much, Ralf. My eyesight has been deteriorating and it's been a challenge to write, read and review. Hopefully I can get this book finished. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally XOs
Comment from Cindy Warren
I had a feeling that Alligator Alley was not far enough to hide Analiese. Tony's guys would find her, and make sure she doesn't testify. Seems Sally and crew will be in the thick of things once again.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2021
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I had a feeling that Alligator Alley was not far enough to hide Analiese. Tony's guys would find her, and make sure she doesn't testify. Seems Sally and crew will be in the thick of things once again.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and keen insight, dear Cindy. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Just what we like to hear....gators....not a good thing! Lots of them, too. They can definitely stay where they belong. Your story has another crime in progress.....until the next chapter.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2021
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Just what we like to hear....gators....not a good thing! Lots of them, too. They can definitely stay where they belong. Your story has another crime in progress.....until the next chapter.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the excellent review and insightful comments, dear Rosemary. Blessings always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm sorry I'm so late, Sal, I've not had a good week.
This is bad news that Fred has been found and killed, that must mean they know where Analiese is. And that is even worse! Will Agent Ken Washburn be able to protect her on his own? I've got a bad feeling about this. Just when it looked like they had Alfanzi wrapped up ready for prison. Now Sal must be protected even more!! This is really exciting, Sal, I'll be ready and waiting this Sunday for your next part. Love and hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2021
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I'm sorry I'm so late, Sal, I've not had a good week.
This is bad news that Fred has been found and killed, that must mean they know where Analiese is. And that is even worse! Will Agent Ken Washburn be able to protect her on his own? I've got a bad feeling about this. Just when it looked like they had Alfanzi wrapped up ready for prison. Now Sal must be protected even more!! This is really exciting, Sal, I'll be ready and waiting this Sunday for your next part. Love and hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx
Comment Written 02-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2021
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I'm sorry you've had as bad week. It been most difficult here. I was able to write though, as that is my outlet these days. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Sending you my very best and extra hugs,
Sal xoxo's
Comment from Father Flaps
Wow! Sally, it seems that Eugene discovered where the FBI are hiding Analiese Irving. And furthermore, it looks like he killed agent Fred Samuels, and tossed his body into a Louisiana croc-filled bog. Maybe he followed Fred's Range Rover back to the dilapidated cabin. In any case, I would have to assume, by now, he's killed Ken and Analiese as well. She won't be doing any testifying in the courthouse. Eugene is a professional killer, and won't be caught like Tony the Tiger was. Tony was sloppy.
Apple pie and ice cream! One of my favorites. But pumpkin pie is my personal go-to, with a scoop of whipped cream!
I can't read your story without thinking of the cleanup that's ahead of the poor people of Louisiana. What a mess down there! And hurricane season is just starting. What if they got hit with another one this fall? I recall, when I was a little kid, my parents decided to take my sister and me to the grandparents during a fierce hurricane that had wandered up the eastern seaboard to southern New Brunswick. I can remember them holding tightly onto us as they guided us into the car. (We didn't have a full basement then, just cement walls and a dirt floor. My mother's parents had a full basement.)
Nicely penned, Sally! After reading this, I can still picture that 15-foot gator lounging across the driveway to the old cabin. But I am also picturing the scene at the hideaway... the dead bodies of Ken Washburn and Analiese Irving.
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2021
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Wow! Sally, it seems that Eugene discovered where the FBI are hiding Analiese Irving. And furthermore, it looks like he killed agent Fred Samuels, and tossed his body into a Louisiana croc-filled bog. Maybe he followed Fred's Range Rover back to the dilapidated cabin. In any case, I would have to assume, by now, he's killed Ken and Analiese as well. She won't be doing any testifying in the courthouse. Eugene is a professional killer, and won't be caught like Tony the Tiger was. Tony was sloppy.
Apple pie and ice cream! One of my favorites. But pumpkin pie is my personal go-to, with a scoop of whipped cream!
I can't read your story without thinking of the cleanup that's ahead of the poor people of Louisiana. What a mess down there! And hurricane season is just starting. What if they got hit with another one this fall? I recall, when I was a little kid, my parents decided to take my sister and me to the grandparents during a fierce hurricane that had wandered up the eastern seaboard to southern New Brunswick. I can remember them holding tightly onto us as they guided us into the car. (We didn't have a full basement then, just cement walls and a dirt floor. My mother's parents had a full basement.)
Nicely penned, Sally! After reading this, I can still picture that 15-foot gator lounging across the driveway to the old cabin. But I am also picturing the scene at the hideaway... the dead bodies of Ken Washburn and Analiese Irving.
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 01-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and super star rating, dear Kim. I wrote this while I wasn?t feeling so good. I had a reaction to the vaccine that went on a few days. This was the by-product. A rough week with our troops left in Afghanistan and the terrible hurricane compelled me to write on. My gift to everyone in spite of it all. When it gets tough, I pray and I write.
Sending you my best today as always and blessings for your week,
Sal XOs?
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Good Morning, Sally
I'm sorry to hear your second shot didn't sit so well. Our youngest son (Luke, Isla's dad) felt the same way. He was down for a couple of days. Now, they are talking about a 3rd shot because of these variants. While our countries are presently dealing with the Delta variant, new ones keep turning up... like mu and C.1.2
I have a feeling this pandemic could go on another couple of years. Yet, we are seeing a lot of people here in New Brunswick without masks. The populace seems to be throwing caution to the wind, just because they've had their 2 shots.
It was a rough week, wasn't it? We've got to be praying for innocent Afghanistan people who must resort to hiking towards Pakistan only to be stopped by the Taliban or other terrorists. Yes, terrorists! The country is in the hands of murdering bandits. That's all they are. (I'm ranting now, aren't I? Sorry about that. It just upsets me so.)
Anyway, blessings to you, my dear!
your fan,
Kimbob
Comment from ShirleyT1
Awesome chapter! I never saw the terrible death of Agent Fred Samuels coming by way of execution by gun shot and then by alligators. Wow! Creative writing at its best. I'm looking forward to what the next chapter holds.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2021
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Awesome chapter! I never saw the terrible death of Agent Fred Samuels coming by way of execution by gun shot and then by alligators. Wow! Creative writing at its best. I'm looking forward to what the next chapter holds.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the super great review and generous six stars, dear Shirley. I'm so very honored. Sending along my very best to you and yours always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Begin Again
You can't have a trial without some drama beforehand, now can we, Sally? I am glad you are out of the coma, but I fear this isn't going to be as easy as they thought. Gators and executions in the swamp. Dogs are on their way, but will it be in time?
Bravo! Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2021
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You can't have a trial without some drama beforehand, now can we, Sally? I am glad you are out of the coma, but I fear this isn't going to be as easy as they thought. Gators and executions in the swamp. Dogs are on their way, but will it be in time?
Bravo! Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous compliments, dear. Blessings always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Very good writing and interesting characters. So glad I found this series again. I hope you've been looking into getting this published. You are quite a good writer and are managing a large number of personalities very well.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2021
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Very good writing and interesting characters. So glad I found this series again. I hope you've been looking into getting this published. You are quite a good writer and are managing a large number of personalities very well.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and kind comments. My first book was published in 2020; and the second and third ready for the publisher. This is my fourth in the series. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Another superb chapter, Sally! Poor Detective Fred Samuels met such a grisly end, in the swamp -- all, no doubt, the work of Tony the Tiger. I'm glad Detective Law is doing well, and on the mend.
Here are my suggested revisions:
A rare day such as this has the masters summoned ...
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A rare day such as this had the masters summoned ... [I know that you wrote some of this paragraph in the present tense, but I don't know if it's advisable to switch back and forth]
...begin their class with paper and pen in hand.
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began their class with paper and pen in hand.
Sally Law has come out of her coma, and doing well."
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Sally Law has come out of her coma, and is doing well."
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You included a beautiful picture, and very timely instructions for giving to the hurricane relief efforts. Great job!
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2021
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Another superb chapter, Sally! Poor Detective Fred Samuels met such a grisly end, in the swamp -- all, no doubt, the work of Tony the Tiger. I'm glad Detective Law is doing well, and on the mend.
Here are my suggested revisions:
A rare day such as this has the masters summoned ...
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A rare day such as this had the masters summoned ... [I know that you wrote some of this paragraph in the present tense, but I don't know if it's advisable to switch back and forth]
...begin their class with paper and pen in hand.
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began their class with paper and pen in hand.
Sally Law has come out of her coma, and doing well."
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Sally Law has come out of her coma, and is doing well."
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You included a beautiful picture, and very timely instructions for giving to the hurricane relief efforts. Great job!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and super sixer. A wonderful honor and blessing. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I made the necessary changes and appreciate those too! Love and blessings always,
Sal xoxo's
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You're very welcome, Sally. Ida even left her mark on NYC, although she was limping along, figuratively speaking, by the time she reached our area. Our cable, phone and internet were off and on all day, and the building elevator is broken because of the flooding; we hope it will be fixed by tomorrow. I know that's nothing, compared to what some people experienced down South. We're praying for them.
Love and prayers, Mary Kay xoxo
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Thank you, again. Ida has killed far more up north than in Louisiana. Wow! Flooding is very dangerous and so is lack of power. We had Hurricane Irma roll directly over us. Thankfully, not too bad. We had to leave our home for a week because we were without power. It was extremely hot. We lost $2k worth of frozen food and perishable items. Still, we recovered and God has helped us. Sending prayers up now. Love and blessings,
Sal XOs
Comment from Janetsue
This is another strong chapter. I did not care for the Green Thingy so much, lol but that 15 ft. gator was a super touch...imagery at its finest. Perhaps Ana and Ken have something good starting??????? Sigh I am such a romantic. Smiles, Janet xo
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2021
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This is another strong chapter. I did not care for the Green Thingy so much, lol but that 15 ft. gator was a super touch...imagery at its finest. Perhaps Ana and Ken have something good starting??????? Sigh I am such a romantic. Smiles, Janet xo
Comment Written 31-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and generous stars, dear Janet. I'm so glad you enjoyed this one too. You'll enjoy the upcoming chapters as well. Stay tuned. Sending you my best today with love and blessings always,
Sal XOs..
