Reviews from

A Day At The Park

5-7-5 Contest Entry

6 total reviews 
Comment from Carmen Ducharme
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Wow I did not know that how terrible .they are so evil what the heck is wrong with our president??? Thank you for sharing this news .We all need to pray ! Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2021

reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
    Yes, we do. Thank you for the great review and stars, Carmen. I added the two men in further back cars but this pic was taken from a real video of them riding bumper cars. I hope it gets better before it gets worse in this world. Thank you again.

    Ron
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Excellent
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Ha, ha Just had to stop by to tell you how much I enjoyed this! But what ARE bump
er car rides but just scaled down murdering and raids?
This is really great and I wish you the best of luck on the contest!
Katiemae Dead

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2021

reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
    Thank you for the great review, Katie. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous piece. Congrats on the win tie.

    Ron
Comment from l.raven
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this just makes me sick...all thanks to biden
and satans children running our government...
they knew what would happen...biden and satans
children were warned...this way in the making years
ago...but who know...not only they were going to
kill off Americans...but people in other countries...
GOD save us...all...your poem brought tears...
very well written...but people need to see what is going on...
you should promote this poem...
your picture says it all...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2021

reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
    Thank you for the great review, Linda. Yes, there's so much evil around anymore, I think God's not going to put up with it too much longer. I really appreciate the generous stars, L. Have yourself a great night and thank you again.

    Ron
reply by l.raven on 23-Aug-2021
    HI Ron, your so welcome sweet guy...I think God has had His fill...and you have a great night as well...love xxoo

    I'll pm you
Comment from l.raven
Excellent
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this just makes me sick...all thanks to biden
and satans children running our government...
they knew what would happen...biden and satans
children were warned...this way in the making years
ago...but who know...not only they were going to
kill off Americans...but people in other countries...
GOD save us...all...your poem brought tears...
very well written...but people need to see what is going on...
you should promote this poem...
your picture says it all...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2021

Comment from Amelia Diaz
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This poem does a very good job at conveying your ideas and definitely packs a punch. It's hard to express yourself in such few syllables, but you absolutely got your point across and left a lasting impression on the reader. Nice job!

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2021

reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
    Thank you for the great review and stars, Amelia. I'm glad you liked this short piece.
Comment from tfawcus
Excellent
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There are many unbelievable things taking place in Afghanistan at the moment and dark days to come. Your short poem catches something of the absurdity and mindless cruelty.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2021

reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
    Thank you for the great review, Tony. Yes, I'm sure there are dark days to come. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. Have yourself a great night.

    Ron