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Lord and Savior

a contest entry

27 total reviews 
Comment from Eunice Amero
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What a wonderful poem. I know Jesus praise Him because I'm not worthy. Thank God for His mercy and Grace. Thank God for people like you who knows how to share thee gospel even ina poem. Thank you fore sharing. Good luck

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
    Thank you for your very kind review and best wishes.

    Have a great weekend.
reply by Eunice Amero on 20-Aug-2021
    you are more than welcome
Comment from Boogienights
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This is beautifully written and holds some great advice. I wonder though if those who don't follow the teachings of God will not be forgiven. God forgives all who ask. Thanks for sharing. :)

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
    Thanks so much for your review and comments. God is a loving God, and He forgives those who repent and believes. All we have to do is ask, and He is just to forgive us.

    Have a great weekend.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Lord and Savior

Great entry for the Bible Acrostic writing prompt contest. Good acrostic form. Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.


 Comment Written 20-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
    Thanks so much for your review and comments.

    Have a great weekend.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I am a huge fan of Acrostic poetry and your contest entry did NOT disappoint me. It sends an excellent message of how great God is and how powerful he can be in our lives. Thank you for sharing and good luck.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
    Barbara,

    Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments, and best wishes.

    Have a great weekend.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This acrostic poem, LORD AND SAVIOR, follows the vertical, first-letter theme and gives the reader an opportunity to accept the grace of a powerful and forgiving God.

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 Comment Written 20-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
    Bill,

    Thanks so much for your review and comments.

    Have a great weekend.
Comment from papa55mike
Exceptional
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It seems like we are speaking to the wind too many people. They don't want to believe. What a wonderfully written acrostic. I love how you did the first letters.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
    Mike,

    Thanks so much for a great review, very kind comments, and a six-star rating.

    Have a great weekend.
Comment from Beejay
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A very direct presentation that I like.
Your Acrostic poem has a strong , true message accompanying it, as well as following the rules for such a poem. I enjoyed reading it so much.

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 Comment Written 20-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
    Beejay,

    Thanks so much for your review and comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Have a great weekend.

    Blessings...