Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Amen, to get to God...you go though Jesus...
trust and have faith in Him...He gave His life for us...
so we could life eternally...

to truly believe in His words...is to except His gift of
eternal life...for He loves us like no other...

I love your poem of faith...very nicely written...
the perfect picture...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2021

Linda,

Thanks so much for a great review, your support and kindness are appreciated.

Sending lots of love and hugs...Portia
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reply by l.raven on 21-Aug-2021

Hi Portia, soooooooo welcome my sweet friend...lots of love and big hugs back at you...love xxoo

Comment from Sherry Asbury

Excellent

Nicely done...so nicely done one barely notices the form it follows. I was thinking how great the message was - and then discovered it is a Bible acrostic. Your artwork is wonderful - a great package here.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2021

Sherry.

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comment; they are greatly appreciated.

Blessings...Portia

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

Very well written. Each sentence has something noble to say. You have written gracefully and I like the rhyme and rhythm that you kept in line. God bless. Good luck with the contest.
Patty

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2021

Patty,

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments, and best wishes; they are greatly appreciated.

Hugs...Portia

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful, well written and so very true Bible acrostic poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive and true words. Best wishes in the contest. teri

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2021

Teri,

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments, and best wishes; they are greatly appreciated.

Hugs...Portia
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Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

A wonderful tribute to our Lord and Saviour, Jesus Christ. I like the lines:
"Acknowledge His teachings in all your ways -
Victory will be yours throughout all of your days."

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021

Anne,

Thanks so much for your review and comments.

Blessings...

reply by Anne Johnston on 20-Aug-2021

You are very welcome

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Exceptional

"Lord & Savior", is an exceptionally well written and spiritually-uplifting piece. It was a privilege to both read and review this talented poet's work. To me this is a six. Good luck with the contest. My fingers are crossed for you.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021

Duchess,

Thanks so much for this great review, six-star rating, and very kind comments, and thanks for keeping your fingers crossed for me.

Hugs...

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

The author's words are engaging, lovely, descriptive and creative. I pondered on the words of this poem. The poem flows and connects
well. The artwork is perfect and compliment this poem.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021

Maria,

Thanks so much for your review and comments.

Have a great weekend.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Very well presented. A very strong contender. The only suggestion, and it's probably too late, is to change one line which says "you'll be free from all strife." This isn't actually true, nor promised. But we do have His presence in all strife and suffering, in this world we shall have tribulation, but be of good cheer, I have overcome the world. Just a thought. Otherwise an excellent entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021

Thanks for your review and kind comments. Yes, we still have to go through trials and tribulations, which makes us stronger because of His presence.

I was speaking of being free from all worries and strife once we are blessed with everlasting life.

Maybe I didn't make it clear.

Thanks so much...

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your well written acrostic Bible poem. Excellent colorful presentation. Each stanza contains a powerful message.

Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021

Thanks so much for your review and comments.

Have a great weekend.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Wonderful acrostic poem using the words "Lord and Savior" and what a great message of the gospel you've presented in your mon-rhymed stanzas. I liked that you used near rhymes to make it natural speech. Hope you do well in the contest!

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021

Thank you for your very kind review and best wishes.