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Comment from MissMerri
I see this was written in August, which somewhat explains the sequence of the seasons beginning in summer. This is easy to read and makes me want to see more of your work. I have not yet become acquainted with your poetry, but hopefully will be able to do so soon. Thanks for the introduction, and consider adding a picture to make it just a wee bit more appealing.
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I see this was written in August, which somewhat explains the sequence of the seasons beginning in summer. This is easy to read and makes me want to see more of your work. I have not yet become acquainted with your poetry, but hopefully will be able to do so soon. Thanks for the introduction, and consider adding a picture to make it just a wee bit more appealing.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2021
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I first thought this might be a one line contest entry. Your words do highlight the word 'change.' I believe I would add in the season of spring and an image. Seasons do change whether we live in an area that process is evident.
Respectfully, Jan
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I first thought this might be a one line contest entry. Your words do highlight the word 'change.' I believe I would add in the season of spring and an image. Seasons do change whether we live in an area that process is evident.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 13-Dec-2021
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Changes
by Brian S. Watson
Nice short poem about the seasons. It's pretty simple.
Seasons are changing
from Summer to Fall then Winter --
eventually Spring will be here
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Changes
by Brian S. Watson
Nice short poem about the seasons. It's pretty simple.
Seasons are changing
from Summer to Fall then Winter --
eventually Spring will be here
Comment Written 13-Dec-2021
Comment from JLR
All comes the time of change from seconds, to minutes, to hours, to become a day. Seasons and time in perfect rhythms yin and yang in lockstep keeping a
In precise order. Good philosophical introduction, thanks for sharing you work...
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All comes the time of change from seconds, to minutes, to hours, to become a day. Seasons and time in perfect rhythms yin and yang in lockstep keeping a
In precise order. Good philosophical introduction, thanks for sharing you work...
Comment Written 13-Dec-2021
Comment from Tina Crute
Your little poem says a lot. Change is part of life as are the changing seasons. This makes me think of the seasons of life. Some seasons are cold and dark and some are sunny, while others are refreshing and bring new growth. Your simple presentation shines a light on the meaning of your words:) It would look cool if you wrote this poem vertically as well. Nice work!
Tina
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Your little poem says a lot. Change is part of life as are the changing seasons. This makes me think of the seasons of life. Some seasons are cold and dark and some are sunny, while others are refreshing and bring new growth. Your simple presentation shines a light on the meaning of your words:) It would look cool if you wrote this poem vertically as well. Nice work!
Tina
Comment Written 13-Dec-2021
Comment from Anne Johnston
So true, when God created the world, He created the seasons, and though the weather may vary, we can count on each season following the other in their natural pattern.
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So true, when God created the world, He created the seasons, and though the weather may vary, we can count on each season following the other in their natural pattern.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2021
Comment from RShipp
As the saying goes, "The only thing that stays constant is change."
Your poem encompasses a simple truth that is always a truth.
Enjoyed.
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As the saying goes, "The only thing that stays constant is change."
Your poem encompasses a simple truth that is always a truth.
Enjoyed.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2021
Comment from papa55mike
There's one thing certain in the world; change is just around the corner. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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There's one thing certain in the world; change is just around the corner. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 13-Dec-2021
Comment from Janet Foor
Changes are a fact of life. The seasons change and we have moved recently so the seasonal changes we were used to are different here so additional changes.
Well done.
Bletchley
Janet
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Changes are a fact of life. The seasons change and we have moved recently so the seasonal changes we were used to are different here so additional changes.
Well done.
Bletchley
Janet
Comment Written 13-Dec-2021
Comment from Terry Broxson
You are right this is the way it works, although the dates on the calendar don't always line up just right. This is because of global warming no doubt, or maybe not.
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You are right this is the way it works, although the dates on the calendar don't always line up just right. This is because of global warming no doubt, or maybe not.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2021
