One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Tableau poem you have penned about what is going on in Afghanistan right now. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. It makes me so sad that there is evil like that in the world. Hurting innocent people. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2021
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This is a very well written Tableau poem you have penned about what is going on in Afghanistan right now. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. It makes me so sad that there is evil like that in the world. Hurting innocent people. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 21-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Comment from Mark Schardine
women disappear
beneath blue burkas
We do not know what will happen, but we have reason to fear for the safety of the people left behind. These events will continue to haunt us.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2021
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women disappear
beneath blue burkas
We do not know what will happen, but we have reason to fear for the safety of the people left behind. These events will continue to haunt us.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Comment from mermaids
Your words reflect the consequences of the fall for women in Afghanistan. Your words describe a current event that is harsh and I feel for the women and girls of this country.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2021
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Your words reflect the consequences of the fall for women in Afghanistan. Your words describe a current event that is harsh and I feel for the women and girls of this country.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Elaine.
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Comment from Bill Schott
This tableau, Outside the Airport, has the proper formatting and captures the return of Afghanistan to then dark, airless realm of a primative existance.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
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This tableau, Outside the Airport, has the proper formatting and captures the return of Afghanistan to then dark, airless realm of a primative existance.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Sanku
What is happening in Afghanistan is shocking to putting it mildly .I don't know how any regime can treat its women like that .having said that i read an article pointing out that Taliban is Natives of Afghanistan while America is not .The country s very rich in mineral ore and the world want to control it .I am not sure where or with whom the truth lies.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
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What is happening in Afghanistan is shocking to putting it mildly .I don't know how any regime can treat its women like that .having said that i read an article pointing out that Taliban is Natives of Afghanistan while America is not .The country s very rich in mineral ore and the world want to control it .I am not sure where or with whom the truth lies.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
What a great piece of poetry! You are deeply observant and topical. I loved every line of it. Had not come across Tableau till now.Learnt something new. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
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What a great piece of poetry! You are deeply observant and topical. I loved every line of it. Had not come across Tableau till now.Learnt something new. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 20-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Comment from dellsworthpoet
A succinct reporting of current events. The poem flows well. I like the poetry form. Your word choice is without political overtones as much as is possible.
Indeed it is a picture we can interpret for ourselves.
Nice read. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
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A succinct reporting of current events. The poem flows well. I like the poetry form. Your word choice is without political overtones as much as is possible.
Indeed it is a picture we can interpret for ourselves.
Nice read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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You are welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your tableau poem, Gypsy! We are praying that all the people who need to leave can leave safely. My friends know people who are leaving and some have been safely transported to Qatar. We know what awful things the taliban has done in the past. Let's keep praying for the safety of the Afghan people!
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
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Great job with your tableau poem, Gypsy! We are praying that all the people who need to leave can leave safely. My friends know people who are leaving and some have been safely transported to Qatar. We know what awful things the taliban has done in the past. Let's keep praying for the safety of the Afghan people!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
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Yes, let's keep praying. Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Helen. I appreciate it.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a chilling write about the situation in Afghanistan and how the country will be pushed into the dark ages and women will be once again oppressed, it is a tragic situation and man poor people are fleeing the country, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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This is a chilling write about the situation in Afghanistan and how the country will be pushed into the dark ages and women will be once again oppressed, it is a tragic situation and man poor people are fleeing the country, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Comment from duchessofdrumborg
(Tableau) outside the airport, is short, succinct and deftly descriptive. Woven through each line are the golden threads of truth. I very much look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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(Tableau) outside the airport, is short, succinct and deftly descriptive. Woven through each line are the golden threads of truth. I very much look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much duchess. I appreciate your time and review.
Gypsy hugs
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Gypsy, as always you're more than welcome.
God bless and hugs,
the Duchess