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Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
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This is yet another beautiful tribute to Bob (Mastery) and is beautifully written. You shared the highlights of your friendship, which is a lovely touch. Although we weren't close, I learned of his early struggles through Ralf (Raffaelina Lowcock) and his book "Falling Up the Stairs," after he had fallen ill, and came to admire his perseverance in life as well as his obvious talent with the written word.
Once I learned of his illness, I prayed for his recovery, and was very sad when his life came to an end. I am enjoying his entries in the "Santa Diaries" from time to time, which show yet another side to his personality, so full of fun, humor and caring. He also showed great love and concern for his siblings (from whom he was often separated) in the book about his childhood.
Excellent picture for your tribute! When I saw your post, I was happy to see that he's still being remembered.
May he rest in peace with God.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
    Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts about Bob and this posting. You have made my day. Forever blessings, Janet
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a great job with your tribute to Mastery, Spangle. I enjoyed reading it though it is poignant. The picture is perfect. I like the way you included personal details of how you met him.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2021
    I appreciate your review and comments very much, Jan. Thank you for reading this and liking my artwork, too. Smiles, Janet
Comment from Jerome Goldberg
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Janet - This a very well written and very touching memorial for a literary friend. I am not sure who you are talking about but I am sure that he would have appreciated your tribute. May his memory always be for a blessing - Jerry

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2021
    Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Jerry. Mastery was a very special long-time member of FS. He mostly wrote detective stories. His picture and portfolio can still be accessed under the M, above, in Community - FIND A FRIEND :-) Janet
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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I didn't know him that well, but he always reviewed my posts... both poetry and prose. I enjoyed his detective stories. I
always looked for him in my messages and reviewed each chapter as they came. Yes, I will miss him. Happy to know he was a success in the end. Thanks Janet. Nancy:)

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
    You're very welcome, Nancy. He really was a special person! xo
Comment from Begin Again
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An outstanding tribute to a terrific poet and author of many stories, including my favorite mystery ones. I loved the way he could weave the story and hold the reader's attention and leaving them clamoring for more. He will be missed by many.

smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
    He was a pro at cliff hanger endings. I never knew what would be happening next, and that is a great talent to have. Thank you so much for reviewing and sharing your thoughts.
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Janet, I couldn't believe he passed...he had just told me he was going into surgery to have two toes removed because of his diabetes...I told him I would keep him in my prays...
and I read one of Robyn's poems...he had passed...that he wanted to go home to die...

I have a few of his books...he was an amazing writer...
and I love his detective stories...and I was so sorry he went through when he did as a child...

I love your story told sweet girl...and your picture is perfect...priceless...very well written...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
    Thank you for this heartfelt review, Linda. He really was a special person. I'm happy that you like the posting and artwork. Stay safe and well! xo Janet
reply by l.raven on 20-Aug-2021
    your so welcome sweet girl...he will so be missed....you stay safe and be well too...love xxoo
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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What a wonderful tribute to a dear writer friend of Fan Story and yours. I have gotten to know so many that have gone to the heavens above. Very sad to hear of his departing.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
    Love your review, Rosy. Thank you greatly. We really have lost a lot of talented members. That is what happens though, and it is always sad. FanStory is a special community to belong to. I am grateful for all I have learned here from some very kind people. xo Janet
Comment from Badger_29
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A very well written account of an obviously outstanding person and great writer. It was very tastefully told, with good sonsory cues for the reader. You give a real sense to how much he had overcome in his struggles with life;
Very well written!

Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
    Thank you so much for this lovely review, Darren. I am so glad you read the posting and responded so beautifully. Stay safe and well, my friend! --Janet
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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Dear Janet:
This is such a beautiful tribute to Bob. Your long association with him must leave quite a vacuum for you to contend with. I only knew him for two years, and I am quite devastated by his absence. In March, he requested that I collect his poetry and stories into a book for his children, to which I consented. I had no idea it would be this soon!

Bob is a shining star
in a galaxy
of stellar writers.

Rest in peace, my friend. This is perfect Janet. Thank you.

Ralf



 Comment Written 19-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
    He truly leaves a vacuum that is unfillable.
    That is the way with good friends when they
    depart much too soon. I know you were a great
    uplift to him with the project you handled,
    Ralf. For certain, his family has been comforted
    by this book you initiated. Big hugs, Janet
reply by Raffaelina Lowcock on 19-Aug-2021
    How kind of you. Thank you.

    Ralf
reply by Raffaelina Lowcock on 19-Aug-2021
    How kind of you. Thank you.

    Ralf
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
    :-)
Comment from lyenochka
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Thank you for this sweet tribute, Janet! I really liked his Falling UP the Stairs book the best. I don't really like detective stories that much but I read a few of his. Loved your artwork!!

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
    I appreciate your uplifting comments very much, Helen. I'm always glad to know you like the artwork, too. Smiles and hugs, Janet
    (Jessie is doing really well and is a happy kitty.) :-)