Still Falling
Jumped into love and...7 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Lovely poem! And you captured the wavering of uncertainty that the "He loves me/He loves me not" prompt gave. I'm so happy that you found your princely Mr. Right!
Congratulations on your third place finish!
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2021
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Lovely poem! And you captured the wavering of uncertainty that the "He loves me/He loves me not" prompt gave. I'm so happy that you found your princely Mr. Right!
Congratulations on your third place finish!
Comment Written 21-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2021
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Thank you for this nice review and your kind words. :)
Comment from Wendy G
What a lovely poem, and so wonderful that it turned out so well. Your poem is finely written with smooth rhyme and metre. Sending best wishes for your entry in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
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What a lovely poem, and so wonderful that it turned out so well. Your poem is finely written with smooth rhyme and metre. Sending best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much for this lovely review. I'm so grateful as always. :)
Comment from AprilViolet
It looks like you found your prince charming after all! What a delightful poem about how true love comes in different forms. What you have found is very special. Exceptionally written! Six stars
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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It looks like you found your prince charming after all! What a delightful poem about how true love comes in different forms. What you have found is very special. Exceptionally written! Six stars
Comment Written 19-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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Thank you for this fantastic review, it made my day. :)
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a beautiful love poem.There are only a few minor changes you might make to improve the rhythm. In the second stanza, it might flow better if you used 'in a flood'. In the next to the last stanza, perhaps leave out 'right'. Rhythm is something I notice when I read poetry but but it's only a suggestion. Your imagery is crisp and visual and your mood clearly expressed. Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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This is a beautiful love poem.There are only a few minor changes you might make to improve the rhythm. In the second stanza, it might flow better if you used 'in a flood'. In the next to the last stanza, perhaps leave out 'right'. Rhythm is something I notice when I read poetry but but it's only a suggestion. Your imagery is crisp and visual and your mood clearly expressed. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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Thank you fir reading and reviewing my poem.....it's very appreciated.
Comment from Beejay
That's lovely, you found your Prince.....such sweet sentiments. Your presentation is great the picture and your words complement each other so well, I hope this is true, I m sure it is....
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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That's lovely, you found your Prince.....such sweet sentiments. Your presentation is great the picture and your words complement each other so well, I hope this is true, I m sure it is....
Comment Written 19-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Sally Law
Super fantastic poem and so very true! Love that lasts is the love worth having. It is a rare treasure in this world. Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest, mystery poet,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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Super fantastic poem and so very true! Love that lasts is the love worth having. It is a rare treasure in this world. Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest, mystery poet,
Sally :))
Comment Written 19-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much, this wonderful review made my day. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
This is a flawlessly written romantic masterpiece. I love the line then you slipped and then you fell. Genius! I can't imagine this poem not winning the contest
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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This is a flawlessly written romantic masterpiece. I love the line then you slipped and then you fell. Genius! I can't imagine this poem not winning the contest
Comment Written 18-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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Thank you , I'm awed by this special review.
