Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Portia, this read a lot like my Pastors sermon last week...let us not walk away from the Lords words...
embarrass them...learn from them...stay in faith and have hope...

I love your poem my sweet friend...and love this picture...so very nicely written you...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021

Linda,

Your reviews and kindness always bless me.

Thanks so much for your very kind comments and support.

Have a great week.

Lots of love and hugs...Portia

reply by l.raven on 20-Sep-2021

your always so welcome Portia...
and you have a great week as well...
much love and tons of hugs...God Bless...
Linda xxoo

Comment from SHABAMO

Excellent

Excellent poem of belief and repentance, an acknowledgement of the fall and man and the desire to honor God despite our failings. Good work, and thank you for sharing!

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 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021

Shabamo,

Thanks again for another great review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

Blessings...Portia

Comment from pookietoo

Excellent

Beautiful. I love it. Keep up with the poem writing. I enjoyed reading this poem. Good luck to you and best wishes. Keep smiling and sharing your poems.

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 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021

Pookietoo,

Thanks so much for a great review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

Blessings...Portia