Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

This is a well-penned and heartfelt prayer to your God. The verses flow rhythmically and the message is both strong and sincere. A nicely written poem using rhymed couplets.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

Stay safe, and have a great weekend.

Blessings...Portia

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

I truly enjoy your ministry...spreading the good news of the gospel. This is a well rhymed poem of love, faith, reverence and praise. May God give you peace and continue to bless you mightily as you share your gift with FanStory.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021

LJbutterfly,
Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

Stay safe, and have a great weekend.

Blessings...Portia

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

You are so right dear Portia, if we don't have the truth and the hope that lies in Christ alone, we have nothing at all. The cross is the central point of God and man meeting in eternal communion and purpose, servant hood and praise is the only way we can glorify the Lord's sacrifice for us. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021

Roy,

Thanks so for a great review, six-star rating, and your support; they are greatly appreciated.

Have a great week, my friend.

Blessings...Portia

reply by royowen on 20-Sep-2021

Most welcome

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Portia,
This is a good prayer/poem that we all should pray for thanks, understanding and direction. We all need to be lead by all parts
of the trinity.
The yellow background could be metaphoric for the light of God.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021

Joan,

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

I pray you are doing well and keeping safe.

Have a great weekend.

Blessings...Portia

reply by dragonpoet on 17-Sep-2021

Any time, Portia.
I am so far.
Same to you.
Joan

Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

What a great prayer to pray. Truly we need to read and study the Word of God, and it is amazing how the Holy Spirit illuminates it and shows us the path that we should trod. Very well written.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021

Anne,

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

I pray you are doing well and keeping safe.

Have a great weekend.

Blessings...Portia

reply by Anne Johnston on 18-Sep-2021

You are welcome

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I know enjoyed reading your inspirational bible poetry. It's beautifully written. Well written. There are no grammatical errors. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021

Raul,

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated. Your kindness and support mean a lot to me.

Stay safe, and have a great weekend.

Blessings...Portia

reply by Raul1 on 17-Sep-2021

You're welcome and same to you, my friend!

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

This is a very special poem that is spiritually soothing. You are praying to not reject the truth of His word. The Lord is our savior, He gives life and He takes it. He guides and sustains us, supports us in the toughest times of our lives.

Great imagery, visuals and presentation. Thank you so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021

Eternal Muse,

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

I pray you and your family are well and keeping safe.

Have a wonderful week.

Blessings...Portia

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Your poetry is always so beautiful and uplifting. Thank you for sharing the truth unswervingly, dear Portia. It is much needed after a most difficult few weeks. Sending you my best today as always and blessings for your week,
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021

Sally,

You are always so kind. Thanks so much for your review and comments; they are greatly appreciated.

I pray you and your family are well and keeping safe.

Have a great weekend.

Hugs...Portia

Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw

Exceptional

Portia, you are simply wonderful. Reading this poem about God's Word is virtually spirit-filled and the words you weave are so amazing. Yes, the Word of God can instruct and help us to stay focused. Thanks for this wonderful poem, Kit.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021

Kit,

Thanks so much for a great review, six-star rating, very kind and wise comments. I appreciate your support.

I pray you and the family are doing well and keeping safe.

Sending lots of love and hugs

Portia

Comment from mermaids

Exceptional

You have created a beautiful poem that is a prayer. Your words capture a journey of faith. This is a perfect to say in the morning before beginning the day, your words instruct the reader, a spiritual path to follow.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021

Mermaids,

Thanks so much for a great review, six-star rating, very kind and wise comments; they are greatly appreciated.

I pray you and the family are doing well and keeping safe.

Have a great week.

Portia