Reviews from

Best Friends

A fun children's story with lots of phonemes

3 total reviews 
Comment from cupa tea
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Ted hopped on a rock and sat on top, then flipped, then flopped, and hopped off the rock.

Okay say that 10 times fast...lol

Very good...I like your idea with the animals.

Good luck in the contest...

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2021
    Hi cups tea!
    I?m glad you enjoyed the story. Thank you for the comments and the excellent rating. Have a blessed rest of the week.
Comment from LisaMay
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I enjoyed your fun little tale of this couple's very happy friendship. Although appearing to be mis-matched they enjoy laughing together and are best friends. A bushel and peck I recognized as volume measurements.
You have certainly packed your story with phonemes!

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
    Hi LisaMay!
    Thank you for your comments and excellent rating! I'm glad you enjoyed my story.
Comment from tfawcus
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I like the pun in your last lines! The story itself has just the right element of humour in it to hold a child's attention whilst honing his or her reading skills. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
    Hi tfawcus! Thank you for your comments and excellent rating! I.m glad you enjoyed my story.