Running Blind
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23 total reviews
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Another great chapter in your exciting Louisiana story of intrigue and suspense! So Miles is marrying Suzy? And Olivia has finally been discovered as the missing person, Camille Jean-Baptiste.
I don't like the idea that Eugene is on the trail of Analiese, but at least she's got the two FBI agents with her.
Some small errors and suggestions:
No Big Box stores or self-serve check outs.
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No Big Box stores or self-serve checkouts.
A family run eatery is the only joint in town,
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A family-run eatery is the only joint in town,
This isn't Burger King! It's my way, or the highway!"
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"This isn't Burger King! It's my way, or the highway!"
As Tony Alfanzi said-- "I'm as rich as the Queen of Sheba!"
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As Tony Alfanzi said-- 'I'm as rich as the Queen of Sheba!'"
Besides, my pay check is ridiculous.
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Besides, my paycheck is ridiculous.
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This may seem like a ridiculous Yankee question, but is a Gator Burger made out of the usual meat, or... alligators? If alligators, and there are no substitutions, I might have to pass.
I love your sense of humor:
"Brought your cell phone? How nice. There are no cell towers within a fifty-mile radius."
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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Another great chapter in your exciting Louisiana story of intrigue and suspense! So Miles is marrying Suzy? And Olivia has finally been discovered as the missing person, Camille Jean-Baptiste.
I don't like the idea that Eugene is on the trail of Analiese, but at least she's got the two FBI agents with her.
Some small errors and suggestions:
No Big Box stores or self-serve check outs.
-->
No Big Box stores or self-serve checkouts.
A family run eatery is the only joint in town,
-->
A family-run eatery is the only joint in town,
This isn't Burger King! It's my way, or the highway!"
-->
"This isn't Burger King! It's my way, or the highway!"
As Tony Alfanzi said-- "I'm as rich as the Queen of Sheba!"
-->
As Tony Alfanzi said-- 'I'm as rich as the Queen of Sheba!'"
Besides, my pay check is ridiculous.
-->
Besides, my paycheck is ridiculous.
***
This may seem like a ridiculous Yankee question, but is a Gator Burger made out of the usual meat, or... alligators? If alligators, and there are no substitutions, I might have to pass.
I love your sense of humor:
"Brought your cell phone? How nice. There are no cell towers within a fifty-mile radius."
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much for the super great review and star blast, dear Mary Kay. It means so much. I appreciate the slag catching too. I always need that. I appreciate everything you do for me. Sending you my best today and love and blessings always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
You have a lot of characters involved here and I did have trouble following the action, but I think it is because I last read about Det. Sally Law many chapters or another book ago. Each section here is quite interesting, you write very well, and each section is attention grabbing. Great work.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2021
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You have a lot of characters involved here and I did have trouble following the action, but I think it is because I last read about Det. Sally Law many chapters or another book ago. Each section here is quite interesting, you write very well, and each section is attention grabbing. Great work.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the excellent review and generous stars, Carol. Yes, this is my fourth book in the Blind Girl Mysteries. I?ve written myself into them as a character. I?m blind in real life.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally XOs
Comment from Begin Again
i would not want to be anywhere near that cabin... that was about the creepiest description I'd heard. Add in Eugene the tree-tall specimen with bulgin knuckles and I believe we have a mixed cocktail waiting to explode. The agent sure got off his phone in a hurry.
Some good things but I pray they don't get squashed by all the bad.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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i would not want to be anywhere near that cabin... that was about the creepiest description I'd heard. Add in Eugene the tree-tall specimen with bulgin knuckles and I believe we have a mixed cocktail waiting to explode. The agent sure got off his phone in a hurry.
Some good things but I pray they don't get squashed by all the bad.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and insightful comments. Both are greatly appreciated. Blessings always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Sal.
It looks like the Tiger has someone ready, willing, and able to do his dirty work. They have decided to hide Analiese in the same place that Eugene buys his takeout. I remember when Burger King motto was "Have it Your Way." I haven't been there in a long time so I don't know if it is the same. That doesn't sound like a good turn.
I'm sure that Eugene has his methods for getting his job done, and it would be delightful if the good guys figured this all out first.
Z PAL
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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Hello Sal.
It looks like the Tiger has someone ready, willing, and able to do his dirty work. They have decided to hide Analiese in the same place that Eugene buys his takeout. I remember when Burger King motto was "Have it Your Way." I haven't been there in a long time so I don't know if it is the same. That doesn't sound like a good turn.
I'm sure that Eugene has his methods for getting his job done, and it would be delightful if the good guys figured this all out first.
Z PAL
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much, dear Z! I?m so glad you enjoyed this one. Blessings always,
Sal :))
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You're very welcome Sal.
Have a 😁FUN😁 week.
PAL Z
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is a good chapter, Sally, full of good feelings and good news, except for the description of the shack in the woods and the character waiting in line! That has me worried. Well done.
I found one little spag: "The tree-tall specimen of a man learned(leaned) forward...)
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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This is a good chapter, Sally, full of good feelings and good news, except for the description of the shack in the woods and the character waiting in line! That has me worried. Well done.
I found one little spag: "The tree-tall specimen of a man learned(leaned) forward...)
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much for the lovely review and generous compliments. I appreciate the slag catch too. My eyesight is terrible. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from lyenochka
Hooray! A reunion and a future wedding! What a lot of things happened while Sally was in a coma! Hope more details about how that reunion transpired will come later. Good for Samson to help identify Camille.
The big guy at the gater restaurant sounds a little scary. Hope they protect Annaliese well.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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Hooray! A reunion and a future wedding! What a lot of things happened while Sally was in a coma! Hope more details about how that reunion transpired will come later. Good for Samson to help identify Camille.
The big guy at the gater restaurant sounds a little scary. Hope they protect Annaliese well.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much for the awesome review and generous compliments, dear Helen. I appreciate all your blessings and encouragement. Love,
Sal XOs
Comment from royowen
An interesting episode indeed, the man Eugene not only sounds scary but he's liberal with his cash as well, I wonder if the blind girl is safe in her hospital bed, as she should be. Looking forward your next episode, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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An interesting episode indeed, the man Eugene not only sounds scary but he's liberal with his cash as well, I wonder if the blind girl is safe in her hospital bed, as she should be. Looking forward your next episode, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the super great review and readership. Both mean the world to me. Blessings abundant,
Sal XOs...
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Good job
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Sally
I'll say that you know how to keep us readers, where we find your writing is keeps one wondering what is next. In this chapter you wrote something about Susy ---
when She touched my hand to her left ring finger, trying to suppress a giggle.
"Suzy! What is this? I didn't know you were seeing anyone! Spill this instant!"
Gert
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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Hello Sally
I'll say that you know how to keep us readers, where we find your writing is keeps one wondering what is next. In this chapter you wrote something about Susy ---
when She touched my hand to her left ring finger, trying to suppress a giggle.
"Suzy! What is this? I didn't know you were seeing anyone! Spill this instant!"
Gert
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review, dear sweet Gert. I'm delighted to have you with me. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally XOs...
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You are most welcome
You are so welcome Sally
Gert
sal
Comment from Sankey
Well done, again. This Eugene creep sounds ominous. I hope the Blind girl is gonna be safe. Plenty of mystery through here and I guess we will catch up on her missed 3 months.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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Well done, again. This Eugene creep sounds ominous. I hope the Blind girl is gonna be safe. Plenty of mystery through here and I guess we will catch up on her missed 3 months.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the super great review and generous stars, Geoff dear. I'm so glad you enjoyed my latest chapter. Stay tuned! Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I can't wait to find out what happens next. I am worried about Analiese Irving. She's not innocent, but I have a feeling bad things are trying to happen to her.
mosquito eaten, dilapidated trapper's cabin (I didn't know mosquitoes could eat a cabin.)
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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I can't wait to find out what happens next. I am worried about Analiese Irving. She's not innocent, but I have a feeling bad things are trying to happen to her.
mosquito eaten, dilapidated trapper's cabin (I didn't know mosquitoes could eat a cabin.)
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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Oh yeah. This of course is for effect in the settings of the swamp. Everything is mosquito eaten here. Thank you so much.
Sal XOs...
