"The Book of Death"
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Crash Landing!"Is the living really alive and living?
2 total reviews
Comment from Karen Estep
I read what you are saying and agree with the parts I was able to stay with! You are a wonderful technical writer.!
Your facts are good and organized. KEEP WRITING@ Thank you Jesus!
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2021
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I read what you are saying and agree with the parts I was able to stay with! You are a wonderful technical writer.!
Your facts are good and organized. KEEP WRITING@ Thank you Jesus!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2021
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Why thank you for your time review and your inspirations for me.
I guess after writing over 800 + books in 17 and 1/2 years?
That I should continue what do you think?
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching the Choir Here at Fanstory"
Comment from Prova1
The story is ok. But It does seems a little empty in terms of emotion. I am also not a very big fan of the writer's narrative.It gets bland as I read it and the presentation of it confusing. I like the theme and it is important to shed light on this topic . Overall,the best thing about the writing is it's boldness.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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The story is ok. But It does seems a little empty in terms of emotion. I am also not a very big fan of the writer's narrative.It gets bland as I read it and the presentation of it confusing. I like the theme and it is important to shed light on this topic . Overall,the best thing about the writing is it's boldness.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Well three of my other reviewers all gave it five and six ratings because I guess they have been Laden more?
But thanks anyhow for your review.
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching the Choir Here at Fanstory"
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Well, I am looking forward to more of your writings. Good luck! May god bless you.