"The Book of Death"
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Comment from Aiona
Interesting poem! I like the style/format(?) of the stanzas and the use of rhyme in the second, third, and fourth stanzas, but I'm wondering why the first stanza doesn't have any?
I think I saw one typo.
"Reto-Inspection" in the third stanza.
Maybe you meant "Retro-Inspection"?
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2021
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Interesting poem! I like the style/format(?) of the stanzas and the use of rhyme in the second, third, and fourth stanzas, but I'm wondering why the first stanza doesn't have any?
I think I saw one typo.
"Reto-Inspection" in the third stanza.
Maybe you meant "Retro-Inspection"?
Comment Written 16-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2021
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Sorry I haven't gotten a chance to get back to you Aiona.
I've been busy but I actually corrected your typo thoughts about 3 days ago!
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Prova1
I love it. It seems a very interesting topic and I think more people should write about this. I personally like it a lot, because in the past I've tried to right something similar, but it was super complicated to arrange my words and it's impressive how you've been able to capture your thoughts in a few lines. I would love to know if where you got the inspiration from or whether you just came up with it all of a sudden.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2021
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I love it. It seems a very interesting topic and I think more people should write about this. I personally like it a lot, because in the past I've tried to right something similar, but it was super complicated to arrange my words and it's impressive how you've been able to capture your thoughts in a few lines. I would love to know if where you got the inspiration from or whether you just came up with it all of a sudden.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2021
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This piece that I've written is getting a lot of Wonderful reviews.
Sometimes when we are writing we get something going and we know it's going to be a goodie!
Thanks Prova1.
Doctor Ricky 1024