What Is Summertime?
Hot Fun In The Summertime...2 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Rhonnie, I loved the summer activity in your poem. Can I make a few suggestions on punctuation, so your poem reads better? The words are perfect, but I suggest EACH, WHERE, DASHING and TO all begin with lower case letters. If you put a comma after 'dashing,' your poem will read smoother. I still think your poem is really good.
Good work,
Blessings,
Cindy
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Rhonnie, I loved the summer activity in your poem. Can I make a few suggestions on punctuation, so your poem reads better? The words are perfect, but I suggest EACH, WHERE, DASHING and TO all begin with lower case letters. If you put a comma after 'dashing,' your poem will read smoother. I still think your poem is really good.
Good work,
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 14-Aug-2021
Comment from Gert sherwood
Thank you ronnie
for your poem of how to have fun in the summer.
along with all those people not six feet apart on the peopl on the beach.
Gert
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Thank you ronnie
for your poem of how to have fun in the summer.
along with all those people not six feet apart on the peopl on the beach.
Gert
Comment Written 14-Aug-2021