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Clear Beauty

The Ice Goddess creates for us...

4 total reviews 
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Your use of the literary technique of personification will draw the reader in. And my, how beautiful her art is. When I was a kid, some guy named Jack Frost got all of the credit. Now, with my wisdom of age, I realize it was the goddess all along.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
    Thank you fir this terrific review....it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is a beautiful ode to Winter. Winter is one of my favorite seasons. The crisp air, the beautiful white snow and icicles, and of course Christmas!

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
    Mine too...at least the Christmas part..lol. Thank you for this exceptional review, i really appreciate it. :)
Comment from rspoet
Excellent
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the winter contest
with excellent imagery and use of fantasy.
Once winter arrives, there is certainly no rush for the ice
goddess, especially in northern area.
Nicely done with excellent art work.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
    Thank you so much for this very nice review, it's so appreciated. :)
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
Excellent
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Makes me wish for winter. Evocative word choice and lovely accompanying art. She is winter personified not doubt. The feeling of timelessness in winter is there are well.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
    Thank you for this terrific review, it's very appreciated. :)