Chocolate Lovers
One line poem for the contest19 total reviews
Comment from Mama Baer
Wow, fantastic and deserving of the win! What a wonderful reminder message for each of us. Fabulous word choice, chocolatiers. I am often amazed at how so few words (eleven, in your case) carry such profound messages. Thank you!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2021
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Wow, fantastic and deserving of the win! What a wonderful reminder message for each of us. Fabulous word choice, chocolatiers. I am often amazed at how so few words (eleven, in your case) carry such profound messages. Thank you!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2021
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I?m happy you enjoyed this short one on love bring like chocolate. Thank you for sharing your insights- your feedback is much appreciated!
Comment from lyenochka
What a great way to say it! Yes, chocolate has that perfect combination of bitterness and sweetness and it's always a romantic gift! Congratulations on the win!!
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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What a great way to say it! Yes, chocolate has that perfect combination of bitterness and sweetness and it's always a romantic gift! Congratulations on the win!!
Comment Written 02-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Sally Law
Sorry I missed this chocolatey poem. This is just perfect for one line contest, and just happens to be one of my favorite things. Congratulations on your blue ribbon. Sending along my best to you and yours as always,
Sally XOs
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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Sorry I missed this chocolatey poem. This is just perfect for one line contest, and just happens to be one of my favorite things. Congratulations on your blue ribbon. Sending along my best to you and yours as always,
Sally XOs
Comment Written 02-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much! I?m glad you enjoyed this sweet one?
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 02-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a great one line poem June and I love the comparison between the different flavours of both the chocolate and the human. Wow, that looks luscious. Nicely resented,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
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This is a great one line poem June and I love the comparison between the different flavours of both the chocolate and the human. Wow, that looks luscious. Nicely resented,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 15-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
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Yes, love and chocolate - we all need a little of each now and then! Glad you enjoyed this short one.
Comment from Gloria ....
Very nicely put together one liner. I am a big fan of dark 90% dark chocolate with very little sugar, but the sugar first is sometimes just the thing.
This is a most creative entry into this contest, and I wish you great luck. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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Very nicely put together one liner. I am a big fan of dark 90% dark chocolate with very little sugar, but the sugar first is sometimes just the thing.
This is a most creative entry into this contest, and I wish you great luck. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 13-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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Glad you could relate to this short piece. Whether love or chocolates - or both - we need to indulge once in a while. Thanks for shring your thoughts.
Comment from dragonpoet
June,
This single line has a lot of truth in its metaphoric look at love. I like the red for love and the brown for both the troubles and the chocolate. Right now a ice cream sundae would hit the spot.
Good luck, keep writing and stay healthy
JOan
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2021
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June,
This single line has a lot of truth in its metaphoric look at love. I like the red for love and the brown for both the troubles and the chocolate. Right now a ice cream sundae would hit the spot.
Good luck, keep writing and stay healthy
JOan
Comment Written 13-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much for sharing your insights on this short piece! Chocolate and love are subjects we can all relate to.
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You are so very welcome, June.
Joan
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Lovely poem that says it all. I am the world's most avid chocolate lover. I wish you the best in the contest with these few words that tell a story so well. Very well done!!
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2021
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Lovely poem that says it all. I am the world's most avid chocolate lover. I wish you the best in the contest with these few words that tell a story so well. Very well done!!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2021
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Thank you for stopping by to read and share your sentiments on this piece. Glad you enjoyed it. Chocolate is something we can all relate to!
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Want some right now, so fudge bars here I come... made for diabetics!!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A very tempting image
and good presentation, June.
-You wrote a good monostich
about it with effective
imagery and comparison of
chocolates to lovers.
-The images apply very
well to both.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2021
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-A very tempting image
and good presentation, June.
-You wrote a good monostich
about it with effective
imagery and comparison of
chocolates to lovers.
-The images apply very
well to both.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2021
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Thank you for stopping by to read and share your sentiments on this piece. Glad you enjoyed it. Chocolate is something we can all relate to!
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You are welcome, June, and I agree about chocolate!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made my mouth water here June and chocolate is bitter in its natural form and we always add a little sugar to make it palatable, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2021
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You made my mouth water here June and chocolate is bitter in its natural form and we always add a little sugar to make it palatable, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2021
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So glad this piece sweetened your day! Now and then, we could all use a little chocolate in our lives. It feeds my muse!