Comment from Mama Baer

Excellent

Wow, fantastic and deserving of the win! What a wonderful reminder message for each of us. Fabulous word choice, chocolatiers. I am often amazed at how so few words (eleven, in your case) carry such profound messages. Thank you!

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2021

I?m happy you enjoyed this short one on love bring like chocolate. Thank you for sharing your insights- your feedback is much appreciated!

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

What a great way to say it! Yes, chocolate has that perfect combination of bitterness and sweetness and it's always a romantic gift! Congratulations on the win!!

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021

Thank you!

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Sorry I missed this chocolatey poem. This is just perfect for one line contest, and just happens to be one of my favorite things. Congratulations on your blue ribbon. Sending along my best to you and yours as always,
Sally XOs

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021

Thank you so much! I?m glad you enjoyed this sweet one?

Comment from Contests

A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021

Thank you so much!

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

This is a great one line poem June and I love the comparison between the different flavours of both the chocolate and the human. Wow, that looks luscious. Nicely resented,
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021

Yes, love and chocolate - we all need a little of each now and then! Glad you enjoyed this short one.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Very nicely put together one liner. I am a big fan of dark 90% dark chocolate with very little sugar, but the sugar first is sometimes just the thing.

This is a most creative entry into this contest, and I wish you great luck. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021

Glad you could relate to this short piece. Whether love or chocolates - or both - we need to indulge once in a while. Thanks for shring your thoughts.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

June,
This single line has a lot of truth in its metaphoric look at love. I like the red for love and the brown for both the troubles and the chocolate. Right now a ice cream sundae would hit the spot.
Good luck, keep writing and stay healthy
JOan

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2021

Thank you so much for sharing your insights on this short piece! Chocolate and love are subjects we can all relate to.

reply by dragonpoet on 14-Aug-2021

You are so very welcome, June.
Joan

Comment from Sherry Asbury

Excellent

Lovely poem that says it all. I am the world's most avid chocolate lover. I wish you the best in the contest with these few words that tell a story so well. Very well done!!

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2021

Thank you for stopping by to read and share your sentiments on this piece. Glad you enjoyed it. Chocolate is something we can all relate to!

reply by Sherry Asbury on 13-Aug-2021

Want some right now, so fudge bars here I come... made for diabetics!!

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-A very tempting image
and good presentation, June.
-You wrote a good monostich
about it with effective
imagery and comparison of
chocolates to lovers.
-The images apply very
well to both.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2021

Thank you for stopping by to read and share your sentiments on this piece. Glad you enjoyed it. Chocolate is something we can all relate to!

reply by Pam (respa) on 13-Aug-2021

You are welcome, June, and I agree about chocolate!!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You made my mouth water here June and chocolate is bitter in its natural form and we always add a little sugar to make it palatable, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2021

So glad this piece sweetened your day! Now and then, we could all use a little chocolate in our lives. It feeds my muse!