The Song of The Sea
A rhyme inspired by the sea16 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
Stormy weather.
Licking the sandy beach...
Relieve as the Sun is trying?
Soon the sway will mark this day...
As your Sailboat sails away?
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Hope you don't mind my review in rhyme Jewel?
But the depth level?
Had me drowning!
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Stormy weather.
Licking the sandy beach...
Relieve as the Sun is trying?
Soon the sway will mark this day...
As your Sailboat sails away?
...
Hope you don't mind my review in rhyme Jewel?
But the depth level?
Had me drowning!
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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I love poetry reviews! Thank you!
Comment from pharp
Outstanding! (virtual six-star)
You did an exceptional job in the penning of this beautiful poem.
Excellent rhyming throughout with a very smooth flow. It reads like a
beautiful song, I felt a sense of peace. Thanks so much for sharing; it was a joy to read.
Hugs...Portia
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2021
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Outstanding! (virtual six-star)
You did an exceptional job in the penning of this beautiful poem.
Excellent rhyming throughout with a very smooth flow. It reads like a
beautiful song, I felt a sense of peace. Thanks so much for sharing; it was a joy to read.
Hugs...Portia
Comment Written 14-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2021
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Thanks so much
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a very beautifully written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Beautiful breathtaking photo to compliment your words. I love it. Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2021
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This is a very beautifully written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Beautiful breathtaking photo to compliment your words. I love it. Well done.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2021
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Thank you so very much
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
The Song of The Sea
by Poetic Visionary
I love the sea. You have wonderful imagery.
The rhymes do not seem forced. Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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The Song of The Sea
by Poetic Visionary
I love the sea. You have wonderful imagery.
The rhymes do not seem forced. Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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I appreciate that.
Comment from estory
What I liked about this was that you captured the rolling feel of the waves in your meter and with the rhyme scheme repeating and repeating like waves crashing on the shore. The storm passes, and washes away all the tensions and anxieties, and leaves us fresh and clean and ready to move on to the next adventure...estory
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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What I liked about this was that you captured the rolling feel of the waves in your meter and with the rhyme scheme repeating and repeating like waves crashing on the shore. The storm passes, and washes away all the tensions and anxieties, and leaves us fresh and clean and ready to move on to the next adventure...estory
Comment Written 13-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2021
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Thank you! I like your description of how it made you feel.
Comment from Terry Overton
Poems about the ocean are so wonderful to read and they are calming. Yours is no exception. I loved the verses, the images, and the picture you selected to go with the work.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2021
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Poems about the ocean are so wonderful to read and they are calming. Yours is no exception. I loved the verses, the images, and the picture you selected to go with the work.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Poetic Visionary:
I need a favor - would you ask your muse if she has seen my muse lately? She seems to have run off for parts unknown and left no forwarding address.
I love your poem. Barefoot toes absolutely need to dance in the ocean. There is absolutely nothing like it. It's good to see you again.
jan
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2021
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Poetic Visionary:
I need a favor - would you ask your muse if she has seen my muse lately? She seems to have run off for parts unknown and left no forwarding address.
I love your poem. Barefoot toes absolutely need to dance in the ocean. There is absolutely nothing like it. It's good to see you again.
jan
Comment Written 12-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2021
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My muse was gone forever! Yours is waiting for you to drag her on a vacation in nature!
Thank you for reviewing!
Comment from royowen
The sea, and water in general is a most provocative medium for poetic metaphor, and an inspiring source for being a poetic seer. Beautifully written my friend an excellent poem in smooth, articulate and in abcb rhyming, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2021
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The sea, and water in general is a most provocative medium for poetic metaphor, and an inspiring source for being a poetic seer. Beautifully written my friend an excellent poem in smooth, articulate and in abcb rhyming, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much!
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Bless you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
If you own the image, you should be able to post it with your poem without a problem. You painting an ambient scene here, I enjoyed the imagery, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2021
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If you own the image, you should be able to post it with your poem without a problem. You painting an ambient scene here, I enjoyed the imagery, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2021
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I do own it. Was just trying to connect to my fanart account
Comment from Anne Johnston
A delightful piece, great rhyming and a joy to read. There is something relaxing and enjoyable being by the shore and watching the waves roll in. No matter the weather, or what problems we may be carrying, it brings a sense of peace.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2021
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A delightful piece, great rhyming and a joy to read. There is something relaxing and enjoyable being by the shore and watching the waves roll in. No matter the weather, or what problems we may be carrying, it brings a sense of peace.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2021
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Thank you
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You are welcome
