Running Blind
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31 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
Connections on top of connections, this is one of those tangled webs we weave, or they weave. LOL. But every chapter is setting the stage for the next. I guess, why they say writing is about emotions, senses, and conflicts. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
Connections on top of connections, this is one of those tangled webs we weave, or they weave. LOL. But every chapter is setting the stage for the next. I guess, why they say writing is about emotions, senses, and conflicts. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous compliments, Ric dear. So glad you?re enjoying this book. Blessings always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Sankey
What a great chapter once again. I guess we still have some surprises coming? Well done. You certainly retain our deep interest in your writing and NO SPAGS!
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
What a great chapter once again. I guess we still have some surprises coming? Well done. You certainly retain our deep interest in your writing and NO SPAGS!
Comment Written 15-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous stars once again. It's so wonderful to have you here alongside me.
Sending along my very best,
Sal XOs
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Begin Again
I'm really enjoying your well written chapter. You have quite a number of characters in your story that smiles, keeps me busy.
One of these days I will know who is who.
I found the part where the woman finally woke up who has being a coma from a bullet in her artery
Gert
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
Hello Begin Again
I'm really enjoying your well written chapter. You have quite a number of characters in your story that smiles, keeps me busy.
One of these days I will know who is who.
I found the part where the woman finally woke up who has being a coma from a bullet in her artery
Gert
Comment Written 15-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
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This is Sally Law. Begin Again and I are both book writers. I?m the correct one for Running Blind though. I?m delighted you enjoyed this, dearest Gert, and thought it six worthy. Blessings always,
Sally Law XOs
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You are welcome
Gert
Comment from juliaSjames
Dear Sal
I thoroughly enjoyed your tale. You are practically able to hypnotize the reader with your vivid flowing words.
I haven't been following the blind girl series but after reading this I'm hooked.
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
Dear Sal
I thoroughly enjoyed your tale. You are practically able to hypnotize the reader with your vivid flowing words.
I haven't been following the blind girl series but after reading this I'm hooked.
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 15-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Yaay! What a treat from my Julia! I'm delighted to see you, dear. I'm so glad to see your beautiful face and read the lovely review. Blessings always,
Sal XOs...
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Sweet Sal all blessings
Comment from BethShelby
Well, it is good to see the Blind girl up and around again and soon to be back in the thick of thing. I will be looking forward to seeing there this is going. As usual, I enjoying this story.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
Well, it is good to see the Blind girl up and around again and soon to be back in the thick of thing. I will be looking forward to seeing there this is going. As usual, I enjoying this story.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and kind comments. It is most appreciated. Blessings abundant,
Sal XOs...
Comment from damommy
Uh-oh. I see a prison break in the making. The authorities were remiss in allowing her condition and whereabout to be broadcast. More tense moments on the way in new chapters, I suspect.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
Uh-oh. I see a prison break in the making. The authorities were remiss in allowing her condition and whereabout to be broadcast. More tense moments on the way in new chapters, I suspect.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the fun review and insightful comments. It is a,ways good to see you dear. Sending you my best today as,
Sal XO
Comment from M white
I find this chapter very intriguing. There's just one sentence I didn't understand, "Jack said she'd pull up a chair and say the same thing". Nicely arranged and well done.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
I find this chapter very intriguing. There's just one sentence I didn't understand, "Jack said she'd pull up a chair and say the same thing". Nicely arranged and well done.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much for kind review and generous rating. I clarified that area and named the book. Not everyone has read Les Miserables, and I should have mentioned it. Thank you for the valuable feedback. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :))
Comment from Judy Lawless
Well, apparently Sally, and the readers, missed out on some things while she was in that coma! A nice twist. Now you've given us an indication that the murders might not be ending. This is excellent writing, Sally.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
Well, apparently Sally, and the readers, missed out on some things while she was in that coma! A nice twist. Now you've given us an indication that the murders might not be ending. This is excellent writing, Sally.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the super kind review and star blast, Judy dear. I'm so very blessed and honored. I'm glad you enjoyed this and my writing style. :)) Sending you my best, and blessings always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from nomi338
I was led to read this chapter on the strength of the title alone. I have not read any of the previous chapters, but your notes were so well written, I feel that I can easily get up to speed with this story. This is so well written that I can actually very easily visualize it as a video presentation, either as a movie or a series.
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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
I was led to read this chapter on the strength of the title alone. I have not read any of the previous chapters, but your notes were so well written, I feel that I can easily get up to speed with this story. This is so well written that I can actually very easily visualize it as a video presentation, either as a movie or a series.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review, dear Nomi. I'm so pleased you're enjoying my latest book. Blessings to you and yours,
Sally XOs...
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You are so welcome. I cannot wait to read the next chapter.
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is an interesting and intriguing story and left me wanting to read the rest as well as the previous chapters. I don't have a working printer at the moment or I would print it out and catch up. I love mysteries and yours captured my interest from the beginning. Great job.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
This is an interesting and intriguing story and left me wanting to read the rest as well as the previous chapters. I don't have a working printer at the moment or I would print it out and catch up. I love mysteries and yours captured my interest from the beginning. Great job.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Dear Mary,
Thank you for the lovely review and generous six stars. I'm so very honored. Blessings always,
Sally Law XOs