Running Blind
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Running Blind~Chapter Thirteen"The Blind Girl's toughest cold case.
31 total reviews
Comment from Janetsue
So many interesting things happening here...I especially like the connection between Detective Law and her hubby. This line is very revealing: Sensing I'd had my emotional fill, Jackson set the rest aside for later.
The mashed pea message on a notecard is ingenious. Another good cliff hanger ending as well! xo Janet
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2021
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So many interesting things happening here...I especially like the connection between Detective Law and her hubby. This line is very revealing: Sensing I'd had my emotional fill, Jackson set the rest aside for later.
The mashed pea message on a notecard is ingenious. Another good cliff hanger ending as well! xo Janet
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much. You are almost caught up. What a blessing you are to me! Thank you so much, dear Janet! Sending you my very best,
Sal XOs
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
A Blessing! Sally Law has come back from the coma that kept her down for three months. Everyone is elated and keeping quiet about the case for the time being but then Sally sees and hears the news, late one night. This is certainly energizing news. The trial of Tony Alfanzi!
Ralf
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2021
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A Blessing! Sally Law has come back from the coma that kept her down for three months. Everyone is elated and keeping quiet about the case for the time being but then Sally sees and hears the news, late one night. This is certainly energizing news. The trial of Tony Alfanzi!
Ralf
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review of my book chapter, dear Ralf! Sal XOs...
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I am sure glad that you created the story suspenseful...to be continued means that things will get better soon. Lying in a coma for three months is really a tragic scenario. So happy that you, the main character, is still alive!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2021
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I am sure glad that you created the story suspenseful...to be continued means that things will get better soon. Lying in a coma for three months is really a tragic scenario. So happy that you, the main character, is still alive!
Comment Written 25-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much for the wonderful review and insightful comments. It means so much. Sending along my very best, Sally XOs
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm so sorry, Sal, I've been nursing toothache for days, waiting to have it removed on Tuesday.
I was glad to see the Blind Girl is sitting up and feeling better. The news has given her a bit of a shock though. But, will Tony Alfanzi actually get to trial? He isn't the master criminal for nothing, he knows how to get a job done, even when he's in prison. I hope Analiese has someone watching over her? I'm hoping to catch the next part any minute now???? Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2021
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I'm so sorry, Sal, I've been nursing toothache for days, waiting to have it removed on Tuesday.
I was glad to see the Blind Girl is sitting up and feeling better. The news has given her a bit of a shock though. But, will Tony Alfanzi actually get to trial? He isn't the master criminal for nothing, he knows how to get a job done, even when he's in prison. I hope Analiese has someone watching over her? I'm hoping to catch the next part any minute now???? Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2021
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I just posted amidst a very difficult week here. At least I can write, typically no matter what. I?m sorry about your tooth and hope you?ll be feeling better soon. I?m so glad you could catch up we with me and the gang. Sending you my best today and blessings always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Ben Colder
Amazing the prison telegraph. Now, our girl is in a coma with caring people so near. I smell trouble brewing of a different kind. gOOD ONE sal. Sorry to be late.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
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Amazing the prison telegraph. Now, our girl is in a coma with caring people so near. I smell trouble brewing of a different kind. gOOD ONE sal. Sorry to be late.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
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Aw? thank you, dear Ben! I really appreciate the wonderful review and star blast! I?m delighted that you enjoyed this. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally XOs
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
My friend, Sal:
Tony Alfanzi must have friends in every conceivable place under the sun, which makes sense. One cannot become a master criminalist on one's own, eh? I wonder who is keeping his money safe for him while he is enjoying the comforts of jail until trial time? Looking forward to your next chapter.
jan
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2021
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My friend, Sal:
Tony Alfanzi must have friends in every conceivable place under the sun, which makes sense. One cannot become a master criminalist on one's own, eh? I wonder who is keeping his money safe for him while he is enjoying the comforts of jail until trial time? Looking forward to your next chapter.
jan
Comment Written 18-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much for the lovely review dearest Jan. I appreciate your fine reviews and kind support. Blessings always,
Sally xos?
Comment from Cindy Warren
I guess Sally isn't out of the woods yet. Tony isn't going to want her testifying. He's ordering hits from his prison cell, so he must have someone on the inside on his payroll. There's more to come. I'm looking forward to it.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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I guess Sally isn't out of the woods yet. Tony isn't going to want her testifying. He's ordering hits from his prison cell, so he must have someone on the inside on his payroll. There's more to come. I'm looking forward to it.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the excellent review and insightful comments. I'm glad you're enjoying this. Sending you my very best,
Sal XOs
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Sally,
I wonder if Tony has another million dollars to spend in finishing off the blind detective? Analiese is in danger, and Detective Sally won't be around to stop the killing. But I wonder if she'll put the events together and send Mike or Will Moran to ward off this assassin, Eugene?
Terrific chapter, Sally! I enjoyed it. It's nice to see the blind detective recovering from her near death experience.... starving for New Orleans chicken, but all she gets is brown rice. Yuck!
I wonder if Tony can escape from custody? Sometimes the police leave a window open on a hot day. A lucky jump, and Tony could be on the loose again. He's pretty slimy after all.
Looking forward to the next chapter! Keep up the good work, my dear!
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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Hi Sally,
I wonder if Tony has another million dollars to spend in finishing off the blind detective? Analiese is in danger, and Detective Sally won't be around to stop the killing. But I wonder if she'll put the events together and send Mike or Will Moran to ward off this assassin, Eugene?
Terrific chapter, Sally! I enjoyed it. It's nice to see the blind detective recovering from her near death experience.... starving for New Orleans chicken, but all she gets is brown rice. Yuck!
I wonder if Tony can escape from custody? Sometimes the police leave a window open on a hot day. A lucky jump, and Tony could be on the loose again. He's pretty slimy after all.
Looking forward to the next chapter! Keep up the good work, my dear!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 17-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review of my latest book chapter. I'm delighted you enjoyed it. I'm sure to come around soon and get this case solved. Hospital food is just the pitts! Evil people have money because they are connected to the criminal underworld. Alfanzi is no exception. Going deep here. ;) :)
Sending you my best today and blessings always,
Sally XOs
Comment from Liz O'Neill
The recovery part is poignant. You will draw the reader in with the gentleness shown and the meeting of her deceased loved ones. Then we move to a change of setting, character and plot. The reader is drawn in as captive in this unfolding plot. This has a nice blend.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2021
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The recovery part is poignant. You will draw the reader in with the gentleness shown and the meeting of her deceased loved ones. Then we move to a change of setting, character and plot. The reader is drawn in as captive in this unfolding plot. This has a nice blend.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and compliments, dear Liz. So glad you like. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from MAMONIA
Another great chapter in your story. What an experience for the Detective. Her near-death experience was described with such beautiful detail.
So happy to have her back and on the trail of the murderous Tony.
I am looking forward to what happens next. It is definitely exciting and what will happen now to Analiese?
Until our next chapter, my best
Marie
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Another great chapter in your story. What an experience for the Detective. Her near-death experience was described with such beautiful detail.
So happy to have her back and on the trail of the murderous Tony.
I am looking forward to what happens next. It is definitely exciting and what will happen now to Analiese?
Until our next chapter, my best
Marie
Comment Written 16-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review, dear Marie, and the generous compliments. Yes, Analiese is in big trouble. Stay tuned!
Love and blessings always,
Sal XOs
